Ahhhh! That was so great! I resonated so much with this poem. Especially the lines,
“Habitual failing -I wish I could quit” and
“Make my love greater than my pain,
Help my vindictive soul to change,”
Excellent word choice. 😀
Hey, everybody. Feel free to leave me some feedback on my poem. What do you think I can do better? 🙂
The Bible declares that fear of man is a snare,
And this truth matches my experience,
I know it’s real as I’m hearing this.
For a dozen times I can be fine,
And the journey goes pretty well,
But I still think about when I’l…[Read more]
Thanks, Eitan! 🙂
Great job on your poem, Eitan! I love how your poems are filled with truth and end with hope. 🙂
@eitan Love this poem. Thank you for posting this! 🙂
It was amazing! And encouraging! And beautiful! Thank you for sharing!!!
I wrote this poem yesterday, and it’s the first one I’ve ever written in English (not including an attempt when I was 13 or so).
I want to weep
I want to weep until I have no power left to cry,
In Your embrace, I want to wail until my eyes get dry.
‘’It can’t occur’’, You said to me, You voice was sad, not mean,
‘’I long for you, My d…[Read more]
Stumbled upon this today. I love it! Thank you for posting this. 🙂
I actually ended up using a different, but similar, poem for the contest. Thank you so much for the encouragement! 🙂
I have written several poems and I wanted to know how good they are and what I can do to make them better. I mostly write free verse poetry but I have tried using words that rhyme, but they don’t sound as good as the free verse. They probably don’t sound as good because they were like the first few I ever wrote and I didn’t know the rules of…[Read more]
I have a playlist of Russian worship songs, and I love to put it in random orders, This time, this song happened to be the first. It was amazing and gave me a glimpse of Heaven’s joy… So, I hope it will bless you too!
My Homeland Is in Heaven (Heaven Is My Home)
My motherland is in Heaven,
Heaven is my home!
There is my good…[Read more]
That was really good. So amazing. Are you going to enter it in the poetry contest?
Hey, everybody. So, here’s a poem I wrote. Feel free to offer feedback if you want to. 🙂
I Would Be
The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.
Who would I be if nothing stopped me?
If all my weaknesses, fears,
All my sins disappeared.
And I could begin again.
I would seek mercy and justice.
And my hypocrisy? I would bust it.
I w…[Read more]
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