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Gracie replied to the topic Chena’s Story Chpt. 3 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah
You portray characters very well.
Thanks!
It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.
I have an idea of how I can fix that. Thanks! (:
Don’t use brackets in a story…<…
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
*nods* A good thing to think about, and a good thing to do. I’ve known two women in particular who I wouldn’t hesitate to call godly. My mother, and my granny who passed away recently. If everyone in the world patterned their lives after mama’s and granny’s, the world would be a much better place.
Tag me if you end up writing and…[Read more]
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Your poems good. (:
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Thank you! 😀
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Candide replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
You know, @anne_the_noob14, yesterday I listened a sermon on Proverbs 31. The pastor said that trought that poem God himself was praising godly women. So we his children could/should imitate him on doing that. I think it’s something you did here (and, I belive, I may try too).
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Eitan replied to the topic Chena’s Story Chpt. 3 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah 🙂
You portray characters very well.
Hmm… A 16 years old boy teaching the crowds? It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
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Eitan replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
Beautiful! I can’t add anything beyond what have been already said 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
Great poem, Livi! I feel like it can be easy to ignore the challenges and integrity in other people’s lives and I think it’s really cool when people use a form of art (like poetry) to highlight the heroism in others.
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Candide replied to the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
What a incredible mother you have!
I enjoyed the descriptions. I could feel being tired too.
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Livi Ryddle started the topic Another Poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 2 months ago
Here’s a poem I wrote just now 🙂
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How does Mama do it?
She goes about her day,
Fixing meals and wiping spills,
Very busy she does stay.
Washing dishes, folding clothes,
Never ever shirks,
Even when she’s done with wash,
And finds one more dirty shirt.
My brother and I were at the house
For two days on our own;
I did the dishes, w…[Read more]
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Gracie started the topic Chena’s Story Chpt. 3 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
a time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up
III
Eight years later…
Caesar Augustas declared a census that stated everyone had to return to the land of their ancestors to be counted with 12 Roman months to do so. Bethlehem was never particularly bustling with people traveling for the c…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
No, you’re good!
I’m so sorry about the POV! I tried to put a break whenever it switched, and got rid of a lot of thoughts several people had… Do you think I should just leave out Rachel’s part or something?
Hebrew words,.. I changed all Eloha to G-d.
I like the idea of the nick-name. I will have to think of one. I am embarrassed, (to…[Read more]
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AshleaAdams posted an update in the group Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
Hi, everyone! I hope y’all are having a great day!
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Eitan replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
Your prose is great, and the chapter is very good. I think you portrayed the time era very good, and I loved your subtle references to the Bible – The covenant of David and Jonathan, and Boas – the godly, not quite poor man, that take scare of a young woman / girl without a family. Maybe it was totally accidental though, but I still…[Read more]
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Heyo, just so you know my email is acting up…I can’t see new messages at this point…or send anything.
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Ok, I’ll send it here.
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Hi!
Hmm… I’m not sure. I’m pretty sure I have such things, but I can’t think about such right now… What about you?
Something I really admire in my secular friends is their tolerance. Even though we disagree about so many things, they tolerate and love me. Many people call themselves ‘’tolerant and progressive’’ when they’re so far from it, but…[Read more]
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Oh, I got that one last night. (: I also replied to it, (Not sure if it went through).
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It didn’t.
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I sent you an email from my dad’s email. (:
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Beth replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
Awesome!! Will read this soon!
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Gracie started the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted
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Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant town, two miles from Chena’s home. Joab had a wife, named Rachel, and one…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
I think it’s a better idea, so people can comment on each chapter without comments being confused.
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