Anna S.

@beth20

Thank you Beth. <3

@sam-m

Thank you. (:

It was pretty raw, and real… 💔 Thank you again Ms. Sam.

@kimlikesart

Great job on your poem, Kimmi! There was a lot of strong emotion in it. It felt very raw and real and true. Keep up the good work.

Oof.

That was really good Kimmi!

Thank you @sam-m . (:

I’m glad you liked it!

@kimlikesart

Hi, Kimmi!  I really like your poem. 🙂 Some of my favorite lines were: “Do you not know, you rival the stars? Do you not know, who you are?”

Thanks for sharing!

That was beautiful. You are really quite right. I have that a little bit in my book, but when you put it like that, I should use that analogy a lot more.

I fully intend to make my romance novel as appropriate as possible.

Thanks!

Well, if you look at the big picture, the Bible is the biggest romance book there is!

The entire story is pointing to when Christ marries the bride for which he died for!

I’ve never written romance novels, and i dont neccessarily plan to, but I mean, how cool is that? It starts with the bethrothed bride running away, because she hates the man…[Read more]

=)

@beth20 You’re welcome!

@dakota Thanks so much, Dakota!!!

@beth20 Good job on this poem! 🙂

@sam-m

Thanks Sam! It’s one of the only two poems I’ve ever written.

@beth20

Hi, Beth. You did a great job of writing an emotional piece in masterfully concise way. I like you’re writing style and thought it was cool how you ended the poem with a thought-provoking question. Great job!