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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@andrew Cool! 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@andrew Thanks!
Cool! What is the story about?
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This week’s is very . . . fresh, I’ll call it. I just wrote it the other day and I haven’t done much editing.…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Stuck in the Repeat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@katthewriter I like the story, especially the way the flashbacks are written. 🙂
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Candide replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@kari-karast @andrew Thanks! :)I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is a revision of a song I wrote several years ago. As usual, critique and enjoy!
Hand Painted<…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
The one for this week a still a little rough. But I don’t have anything else prepared, so here it is. I had a ti…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Advice on having the MC driving the story forward? in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
Are you sure about that :’D ?
I’ve got the thread pulled up now and will read it when I get the chance! Thank you!
edit: agh, I forgot the tag again! 😀
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Advice on having the MC driving the story forward? in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
Oooh, what thread is the story on? I’d love to read it!
If your plot is such that putting Zoe on the line would work, that could pull Chloe out enough to take action. Or if she realizes she isn’t going to have peace until Nicholas is stopped, or if she has a vengeful personality . . . there are several options, but they all depend on the…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Advice on having the MC driving the story forward? in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
@andrew LOL! Umm. Yeah. A little vague, but i think i get it.
I don’t think I know how to help though. . . I think Naiya Dyani has better answers than I can give!
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@andrew That’s okay! 🙂
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Advice on having the MC driving the story forward? in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
Hey!SO what your saying is, your main character doesn’t act as the main character?
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Well, guys, I don’t have one prepared for this week, so how about you guys take a turn and post lyrical…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@andrew Thanks! And while He wills, I will.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
I don’t often write lullabies, but I was inspired so . . . here it is. Enjoy and critique!
Blue Yonder Lullaby<…[Read more]
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Warden replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@andrew thanks for the game! I’m sad its done. What a cool middle name!
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@andrew That’s awesome! It’s a good name.
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@andrew Sounds good!
No problem! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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