Andrew Schmidt

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This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

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Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

@andrew I like it! It has a very joyful, almost bouncy feel to it.

Just s curious question, why did you choose to star all three flowers in the same poem?

Btw, your new forum tag is very funny!

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Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]

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This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

Awaken the Dawn
Up the pale granite heights I climb.…[Read more]

@andrew Very interesting! I like it! 🙂

@andrew, wow, this story keeps having unexpected twists. Good job!

@andrew Thanks so much!!

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This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless…[Read more]

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@andrew Very nice!! I like the vivid word choice and the vigorous personification you gave the 🌻. Good work! 🙂</p>

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This week’s a revision of one I wrote years ago. Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

The Surrendering
I’m down to…[Read more]

@andrew This is really pretty! I like the symbolism and the word choice to describe actions. Excellent! 🙂

@Andrew Thanks for writing!

@andrew Eeey, the next part’s out! 😁

Wow. Cool story.

@Andrew, can’t wait for the next part!

@andrew Thanks and have a Merry Christmas!! 🙂

@andrew Thanks!

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The inspiration for this song came to me around last Christmas but I couldn’t get it to work out until now! Enj…[Read more]

@andrew Thank you!

That’s neat! If they become poems, will you ne posting them on here?

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This one I just recently finished after about a month of struggling with it and forgetting about it. As always,…[Read more]