Romance Writers

@corine

Hi Corine!

I love your view of romance! That’s incredibly beautiful.

I love reading romance, mostly Historical romance. Historical romance is beautiful to me because it captures the beauty of something we’re losing today: Chivalry.  I think chivalry is very important and there’s so little of it left in our culture today. People dont…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Aww thank you ^_^ I wrote it wanting it to be moving, to have the message of how an honest person can be changed for the worse through hatred and envy.

Yes!! That’s so cool! I love Dakota! 😀 😀

@esther-sears

Oof! The whole thing was moving!!  But I guess particularly the end. As far as anything I would have change. . . I think @vivian-grant already said all that needed to be said!

You are in the Meraki guild!! That’s the guild my sis is in. Dakota.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Thank you so much!!! 😀 I’m so glad you liked it ^_^ Were there any parts in particular that moved you? (Or would have changed about the story?)

@vivian-grant

Ikr? It’s so beautiful!! Your story sounds interesting as well.

Are you new in Story Embers?

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Which story are you talking about?

@esther-sears

That was so powerful! All most brought me to tears(and I never cry over book)!! So sad and so meaningful! I love it!

@vivian-grant It already sounds super cool!! 😀 I’m excited to read it!

@esther-sears

Thank you! It’s a fantasy about a young prison guard and a magic user commissioned to guard a witch.

Here is the link to the page:

And so it begins!

@vivian-grant Those are sooooo helpful, I appreciate it so much!!

I’d love to read your story! What’s it about?

@esther-sears

I was wondering something. I recently posted the first half of a short story of mine, and though someone read it I was wondering if you would also like to read it before I post the second half?

@esther-sears

You’re welcome! This was a neat brain challenge, and fun besides.

1. There’s the sentence near the beginning ‘As Bjorn and I walked up, I could see that the house was two stories, one of the only ones in the village.’ It’s a little choppy, and it interrupted the flow of the narration. Possible change: ‘As Bjorn and I walked up, I…[Read more]

@vivian-grant Thank you sooo much!! It means so much to hear you say that ^_^ I’m glad to hear you didn’t know what was going to happen right away 🙂

Yes, you are pronouncing Bjorn correctly 😉

That’s a very good point about the ships! Thanks 🙂

Would you mind commenting on the grammer mistakes in the document? I definitely want to get those…[Read more]