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Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP

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  • #132861
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @mischievous-thwapling

    Sorry for asking (again)– I’m a impatient person–but can you write the next post soon? I am in one of my Wingfeather writing moods, and that means I’m more apt to write and not just wait. Again, sorry!

    @everyone

    So, those who read the last post of the story I wrote probably noticed that Sylvie is not Sylvie’s real name–it’s Caitir. I did this so that the Wingfeathers wouldn’t figure out that Sylvie is the daughter of Artham and Esben’s younger sister (we did agree on this, correct? I think we did.) until someone (possibly Kenna…) reveals that Sylvie’s name is actually Caitir, therefore letting Artham, Nia, and whoever else know that Sylvie Bronin is Caitir Wingfeather, daughter of the previous Song Maiden, and the Jewels’ cousin.

    Possible names I’ve come up with for unnamed characters are:

    For Sylvie’s real mother and Janner, Kalmar, and Leeli’s aunt: Miria Wingfeather (later Aernil) -I really like the name Miria, and I think it flows well.
    For Sylvie’s real father and Janner, Kalmar, and Leeli’s uncle: Miles Aernil -I’ve had this one rolling around in my head for a long time, and I think it has a good ring to it. Plus, I had the idea that he was a soldier, and miles, militis means soldier in Latin.
    Sylvie’s adopted mother: Calida Bronin – It means warm, loving, and, as she’s a very motherly person, I thought it would fit well.
    Sylvie’s adopted older sister: Lileas Bronin
    Sylvie’s adopted oldest brother: Antonio Bronin
    Sylvie’s adopted older (not oldest) brother: Brodric Bronin
    Sylvie’s adopted younger sister: Elsie Bronin
    I’m still trying to figure out Sylvie’s adopted father’s name (or if he’s a character mentioned in the books. I’ve thought about Danniby because 1) it never says his last name, so it could be Bronin, 2) Danniby unfortunately died in the last book, so it would fit in when I said Sylvie’s father died in the second Annieran War, 3) it would just be fun to do!

    Anyway, what do y’all think?

    "The seed of the New World smolders. Bear the Flame."~The Green Ember.

    #132876
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    I don’t remember discussing Sylvie’s non-adopted family (probably just my bad memory acting up again, haha), but that plan works great for me!! And I think it’d be awesome if Danniby was her dad. *wistfully thinks of how I really liked Danniby – and Rudric – and pretty much everyone else who died* You came up with great names (I really like Calida; gotta use that sometime!), thanks for putting this all together!

    "For love is strong as death." -God

    #133067
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    *Runs into room, shouting excitedly*

    Alright! Danniby is her dad! (thanks Kinnan!)

    *Waits for response and slowly realizes nobody is there*

    Umm……………….

    *Fidgets with hem of dress*

    *Spots piece of parchment and pen on table, reaches over and grabs it, and leaves a note*

    __________________________________________________________________________

    To: @wingiby-iggiby, @mischievous-thwapling, @joelle-stone, @backwardslivewriter, @crazywriter, and @arindown

    What now?

    ~Kylie S. Pierce

    __________________________________________________________________________

     

    *Backs slowly out of the room*

    So yeah… That was kind of weird–hopefully it at least made you laugh.

    "The seed of the New World smolders. Bear the Flame."~The Green Ember.

    #133355
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    Haha, good one. 🙂 Sry I haven’t been here; I was on vacation for a week.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *slowly pokes head out of cabinet and looks around* *scrambles ungracefully out of cabinet with relieved sigh to get out of cramped space* *notices note* *reads note* *wastes time finding a good pen* *writes…*

    To @kylie-wingfeather, @mischievous-thwapling, @wingiby-iggiby, @arindown, @crazywriter, & @backwardslivewriter

    Greetings! I have returned to much silence. Where are we all hiding? Shall we continue? I believe my beloved Evil Scientist has claimed the next post.

    I hope you all have a wonderful chocolate-filled day.

    ~Joelle Stone

    (P.S. Yes yes, my note was nowhere near as concise as Miss Pierce’s, but I’m not one to write small.)

    *stands back and stares at note* *shakes head at self* *shrugs and climbs back into cabinet*

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Haha, that was fun, thanks for the idea, Kylie! 🙂

    "For love is strong as death." -God

    #133393
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    *Stares at screen*

    *Thought running through my head: oh no, my insanity has caught on!*

    "The seed of the New World smolders. Bear the Flame."~The Green Ember.

    #133448
    Audra E. S.
    @backwardslivewriter

    All right all right I’ll go for it. But I am currently seeking an accelerated course of study along with a job so don’t expect me to be more present over the summer, y’all-I’ll be even more busy, in all honesty.

    “Caitir! How darest thou!” Sara glanced away from Leeli as she heard Sylvie’s friend whisper-shout and Sylvie giggle.

    “It’s nice that she has friends,” Sara murmured. “When I tried to talk to her, she freaked out. It reminds me of some of Armulyn’s orphans at first. Quiet, always hiding from the other orphans and I. It took me some time to befriend them, and they seemed so lonely…”

    Leeli nodded, pale and absent-minded. “I remember. Layna was quiet and hid from everyone but certain few of Armulyn’s orphans. Did Sylvie’s friend call her Caitir?”

    Sylvie studied her. “Yes. Why?”

    Leeli looked away. “It’s nothing.”

    Could one steal past those watchful dragons? I thought I could.
    -C.S. Lewis

    #133450
    Audra E. S.
    @backwardslivewriter

    Now write, y’all.

    Could one steal past those watchful dragons? I thought I could.
    -C.S. Lewis

    #133498
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @crazywriter


    @mischievous-thwapling


    @arindown


    @backwardslivewriter


    @wingiby-iggiby


    @joelle-stone

    @whoever-i-forgot

    Okay, y’all…

    THEY’RE COMING OUT WITH A WINGFEATHER SAGA ANIMATED SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *Cue the squealing and jumping around*

    I just watched it on Facebook, and from the mouth of Andrew Peterson himself, THEY’RE FINALLY COMING OUT WITH A SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!! They’re partnering with Angel Studios, who do the Chosen!

    *Dances out of room singing: There’s gonna be a series, there’s gonna be a series!!!!!!!*

    "The seed of the New World smolders. Bear the Flame."~The Green Ember.

    #133502
    Arindown (Gracie)
    @arindown

    @kylie-wingfeather Thanks so much for telling us! *grins* My sister and I hadn’t got around to watching the replay of the announcement yet.😄 I am SOOOOOOOO excited (especially it being Angel Studios, I LOVE the Chosen)!

    *dances around for a few minutes (screaming on the inside)*

    Not all those who wander are lost.

    #133504
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    AHA!! THAT WAS THE ANNOUNCEMENT HE HINTED AT DURING THAT CLASS!! *grabs your hands and spins you around* YAAAAAAAAYY!!

    And partnering with Angel Studios is one of THE BEST CHOICES they could have made. In the words of Arindown, “I LOVE the Chosen!” (especially their theme song). So YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!!!! When is it coming out, do you know?

    "For love is strong as death." -God

    #133822
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    Through the pain in her abdomen Arundelle only heard one word: “Caitir.” She halted and Artham glanced at her in concern.

    “Are you okay?”

    Arundelle bit her lip. Something about that name… something that tickled the back of her memory. But a fresh stab of agony shot it out of her mind as she gasped and leaned on Artham’s arm. “No,” she said. “No, it’s not. Artham… I’m in labor.”

    ———————

    Thought I’d scratch having Arundelle early into the pregnancy for dramatic purposes. 😉 @kylie-wingfeather @backwardslivewriter @mischievous-thwapling @crazywriter

    "For love is strong as death." -God

    #133912
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    Aaaaccckkkkkkkkk, sorry for being away so long! Sorry sorry sorry!

    _____

    Kalmar glanced up when he heard that crazy red-haired girl giggling something with the word “Caitir” in it. It tickled the back of his mind, but he couldn’t remember why it sounded so familiar. He turned to Janner, about to ask if he recognized it, too, when Arundelle gasped out, “Artham… I’m in labor.”

    Kalmar froze, turning to his aunt. He was about to say something when Artham exploded, “What?” Lowering his voice, Kalmar’s unlce asked, “Really? Now? Right now?”

    Arundelle managed a dazed nod.

    Artham’s blue eyes grew stormy and wide. “Nia! ___ (what’s the name of the lady whose house they’re going to stay at?)! Arundelle’s in labor!” he called, still supporting his wife.

    Kalmar shook his rain-drenched hair out of his eyes and stifled a sigh. He knew they were in for a long night.

    ____

    That was terrible. But my brain’s pretty dead right now, so it’ll have to do. Write, my fellow Featherheads!  Keep this RP alive! @kylie-wingfeather @backwardslivewriter @joelle-stone @crazywriter

     

     

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #133922
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @mischievous-thwapling

    Calida Bronin.

    "The seed of the New World smolders. Bear the Flame."~The Green Ember.

    #133955
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @kylie-wingfeather

    Ahh, okay, thx!

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #135747
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    *notices my post didn’t show up* *sadly retypes it*

    Soo… life’s a little busy right now, and I’m spending WAY too much time on the internet, so I’m gonna have to bow out of this RP (and a lot of others). *cringes* I’m REAAALLY sorry! I know me leaving will probably kill this since it has so few peeps, but maybe you can recruit someone else? Sorry again, and thanks so so so much for writing with me!

    "For love is strong as death." -God

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