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Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story?

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  • #116161
    Arindown (Gracie)
    @arindown

      @joelle-stone

      Welcome aboard!

      "If I'm gonna break, I'll break like the dawn." -Nightbirde

      #116244
      Joelle Stone
      @joelle-stone

        Thanks guys! I’ve thought up my characters; tell me which one you like better:

         

        Name: Vika

        Origin: Ruska

        Features: Curly light brown hair that is a little longer than her shoulders. Dark brown eyes. Pointed features. Speaks with a Russian accent.

        Weapons: (can someone inform me on what weapons we use?)

        Clothing: dark brown leggings, creamish wrap-around tunic (like Rey’s shirt without the dangly things), also has Rey’s arm-wraps, light brown boots. Occasionally a cloak.

        Likes: Fighting, winning, laughing

        Dislikes: losing, sitting still, being confused

        Personality Traits: Honest, Cheerful but can be focused (is scary when focused), easily loses her temper, poor loser

        Best Personality Trait: Honesty

        Worst Personality Trait: Bad loser

         

        Anything else needed for her?

         

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        Name: Aleck

        Origin: Scotchlind

        Features: Wavy auburn hair that reaches to his shoulders, playful hazel-green eyes, rounded features, speaks with a strong Scottish brogue.

        Weapons: (Again, I need help! :P)

        Clothing: Rough sandy colored trousers, deep brown tunic with a lighter brown shirt underneath, tall black boots, Jedi cloak (aren’t they awesome!!).

        Likes: Good food, fighting, riding, reading, cooking

        Dislikes: being hungry, solitude, cats

        Personality Traits: Trusting and Trustworthy, Bold, Friendly, Smart-Alec (ha ha), Can Be Rude, Disrespectful, Temper

        Best Personality Trait: Friendliness

        Worst Personality Trait: Bad Temper

        #116252
        Winter Rose
        @winter_rose

          @joelle-stone

          Ooooh, I can’t decide, both of those characters sound really interesting! Actually, I think that we’re having multiple characters each, so you could potentially use both of them.

          As far as weapons you could pretty much do anything you like. It could be more traditional, like swords and battle axes and bows/arrows, or you could use modern or super-modern techy weapons, like machine guns or blasters or stun rays… It’s a big galaxy, there’s a lot of options!

          Hope this helps!

          What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

          #116254
          Ella
          @writergirl101

            @joelle-stone

            Like, @winter_rose said, we can have multiple characters, but if you prefer to stick with one, I like Vika. 😉

            Sometimes you win, sometimes you learn.

            #116319
            Joelle Stone
            @joelle-stone

              Sry for not getting back to you guys, it wouldn’t let me post for whatever reason. *shrugs* Anyway, thx for the info! I think I’ll try both Vika and Aleck, but one might fade out eventually. 😉 I was thinking I might use a light saber, but as that’s highly superior to a sword or anything like that, maybe I won’t. At any rate, I was going to have one of them (Vika I think) have highly superior weapons in a highly superior planet, and Aleck to be in the middle. 🙂 Still thinking up his weapons (do I want swords and stuff or not? Or guns? I don’t really like guns, but… oops, thinking out loud.), so I’ll let you guys know when I come up with something.

               

              Can someone give me an idea of the main plot of this story? I kind of get the games (I think), but it’d be helpful if someone confirmed. 🙂 And can y’all post your characters and/or who is doing the story so far? Thx! 🙂


              @winter_rose
              @writergirl101

              #116401
              Winter Rose
              @winter_rose

                @joelle-stone

                Sorry for the wait, I didn’t see your post until just recently!

                I don’t really know if we really solidified a plot after getting into the games (the Culling)… Basically, your character has to go through a series of tests and competition to get into the games, or they are selected by some other way. It might be different for every planet. Only one person can enter per planet, I believe.

                Also, I think that there is a separate competition for each branch of government… I’m not sure how that will work if we want all of our characters together at some point…

                Anyway, my first character is called Sikya, and she’s from a Native American based culture. Her home is less a country and more a reserve on a big supermodern planet, so her main goal is to restore her clan/tribe to a high position of authority. I have two others that I’d like to include, one from an Egyptian culture and another from a Chinese/ Eastern society, but they’re just concepts for now.

                Sorry I don’t have more information on the plot, I know that we do have a villain along with his or her syndicate, and is trying to rig the games so only the people he wants win… another note, the villain will probably be one of the judges who can grant like a pardon from elimination.

                Feel free pitch any ideas for the storyline that you have.


                @arindown
                and @writergirl101, please let me know if any of this doesn’t sound right.

                What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                #116555
                Joelle Stone
                @joelle-stone

                  Sorry I haven’t been on, guys!! Been busy. 🙂


                  @winter_rose
                  Ooh, thanks for the plot! It sounds really fun. So, one person from each planet? Hm. If I didn’t have one of my characters in the games, would that work out or not? :/ *thinks hard* This’ll be fun when we start, though!

                  #116556
                  Joelle Stone
                  @joelle-stone

                    ‘Kay, here are Aleck’s and Vika’s weapons:

                    Aleck

                    Weapons: A small blaster and light saber (on his planet, he’ll use different weapons in the games to keep things even. Does that work?)

                    Vika

                    Weapons: Anything and everything. She mostly prefers combat weaponless, you know, like wrestling or something, but she also uses pretty much whatever’s handy (pepper, fingernails, wasps, etc.)

                    #116588
                    Winter Rose
                    @winter_rose

                      @joelle-stone

                      Wasps…lol.

                      Also, I’m looking back, and I’m not really sure if it is only one person per planet…it may be per country.

                      You could just have multiple planets, one for each character you want to play. And there are different branches for you character to enter, so they still could be from the same planet but are in different competitions. (Science, military, technology, ect. As of now we have eight branches.)

                      Sorry if it’s confusing, I’ll make a chart or graph or something once I get all of my information right.

                      What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                      #116590
                      Brooke
                      @wingiby-iggiby

                        Hi y’all! I just wanted to say I am reading through your posts, and thought this so cool! If it’s alright, may I join? I’m not sure if I’ll be able to post a lot right now, ’cause we’re moving at the end of next week, and that’s a bit chaotic — and then we have to get settled into the new house, unpack, etc. I still have to read through the rest of y’all’s posts, so I know what’s going on, but if there’s no room for me I’ll happily sit back and read whatever you guys post. I totally understand if there’s no room. 😉

                        And by the way, I read this and was thinking: STAR WARS. Long ago in a galaxy far, far away….

                        I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                        Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                        #116647
                        Winter Rose
                        @winter_rose

                          @wingiby-iggiby

                          You’re welcome to join! It’s okay if you’re not active for a bit, you can always catch up later!

                          And yes, the more this develops the more similarities I see between it and Star Wars.😄

                          What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                          #116654
                          Mel
                          @melodyjoy

                            @writergirl101


                            @arindown


                            @winter_rose

                            Hi! I mentioned like over 3 weeks ago that I would be joining… NOW I am lol!

                            Question: How do you do a quote where it says “Person wrote” in blue and there’s a blue line? That would be super helpful for me to know 🙂

                            Am working on a character or 2. We’ll see.

                            Okay, so the games are called Culling and @winter_rose mentioned in her plot explaining that only one person can enter per planet. Ok. Do the competitors (still need a name for those right?) go to a place to compete? Probably a planet right? That’s what I’m thinking. And in all my reading I never saw any posts about the planet/country (?) they actually go to. I think it would be cool to develop that planet, etc. LMK if that’s something we can use 🙂

                            Gonna sit here and think now 🙂

                            Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                            #116655
                            Mel
                            @melodyjoy

                              I dunno why my tags didn’t work… Lemme see

                              Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                              #116667
                              Mel
                              @melodyjoy

                                And I’m kinda confused. Can I totally create a whole new planet, country, and culture, or do I have to base it off of something we are familiar with?

                                Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                                #116699
                                Brooke
                                @wingiby-iggiby

                                  @Winter_Rose

                                  Thank you! I’m looking forward to joining and have been creating a world all day, lol 😛 And yes, STAR WARS rocks!!! I do like the idea of the story, though, because I’ve never done anything like this. Are lightsabers allowed?

                                  Hiya, @Mel  I’m glad you could join us — but I have only just got here and have yet to read through all the previous posts, so I’m afraid I can’t give many answers. I am answerless 😀 But I do agree: we need to come up with the world where they go to compete. Its rather important. Or maybe it could be a giant floating spaceship shaped like the Death Star! I know, I know, I’ll stop….

                                  We’re moving at the end of next week, so I probably won’t be able to post, but I will be coming up with my world! I have one for sure; and I might do another just for the fun of it. If I have time, I’ll try to get on here.

                                  I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                                  Shoot that fire right through my soul.

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