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  • #118568
    Mel
    @melodyjoy

      @winter_rose

      YES!!! I love it!

      Now we have our three high judges. Andor. Aleena, and Maxwort.

      !YAY!

      Can you please answer wether or not you think Daeus should edit that Backstory of Andor post, or if we should just post it?

      MELODY

      • This reply was modified 5 years, 8 months ago by Mel. Reason: tag didn't work

      Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

      #118575
      Winter Rose
      @winter_rose

        @melodyjoy

        You asked if we should have 1 or 2 judges for the individual games (Sorry I’m not exactly sure how to blockquote…), so I’d be fine with two, even three, because it might be better to have more than one person deciding who wins, but I think that one might be easier on everyone else.

         

        What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

        #118578
        Winter Rose
        @winter_rose

          @melodyjoy

          Oh, sorry!

          I think that we should just post it, once we get the name for the Jedi-people. We already have so much up it won’t make to much of a difference.

          What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

          #118579
          Winter Rose
          @winter_rose

            @melodyjoy @wingiby-iggiby @joelle-stone

            How does everyone feel about the name Crystalbolt Hunters for the Jedi-police?

            If not that here’s a few more: The Elite Unit, the High Patrol, Recon Force, the Silent Guard, The Watch Circle, the Circle of Hunters, the Watchkeepers, the Crystalbolt Circle or the Crystalbolt Keepers, or Crystalbolt Guards. (Crystalbolt just sounds really cool after you say it a few times, TBH)

            What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

            #118580
            Mel
            @melodyjoy

              @winter_rose

              Yeah, ok. So we do need the Jedi People names. LOL

              So definitely we have 3 high judges over everything and then either 2 or 3 for each individual game. We have 8 games, so we would need 16 judges. (Let’s just go with 2 judges per game. It’s a good compromise between 1 and 3 LOL LOL)

              -military

              -science

              -technology

              -diplomats

              -judicial branch

              -legislative branch

              -medical branch

              We need one more branch. We only have 7, but there are 8 games and we need a branch for each game for the winners to lead one day.

              MELODY

               

              Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

              #118581
              Winter Rose
              @winter_rose

                @melodyjoy

                The last branch was one that Ella made up, called The Operative Unit, or TOU for short (The agents are called TOUs, as in twos). It’s basically spies and a undercover government agency, kind of like the FBI or CIA.

                What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                #118582
                Mel
                @melodyjoy

                  @winter_rose

                  Okay, makes sense

                  Oh, just saw your Jedi people names post… should have noticed that earlier. Let me look at it.

                  • This reply was modified 5 years, 8 months ago by Mel. Reason: Just saw the Jedi people name post LOL

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                  #118583
                  Mel
                  @melodyjoy

                    Do you know if @arindown is still with us?

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                    #118585
                    Mel
                    @melodyjoy

                      The Elite Unit, the High Patrol, the Silent Guard,

                      I like those.

                      Crystalbolt is cool but do they really have a Crystal Bolt? I dont want to give readers the wrong impression LOL

                      Same with the watchkeepers. THey’re not really keeping watches… LOL

                      MELODY

                      P.S. We could go either way though, I am totally unbiased 🙂

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                      #118586
                      Winter Rose
                      @winter_rose

                        I’m not really sure at all… she never said she was leaving but she hasn’t posted for a while. I think it’s safe to assume that she’s left, but if she comes back we can probably work something out.

                        What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                        #118587
                        Winter Rose
                        @winter_rose

                          Yeah, for the Crystalbolt thing they have a weapon that uses black crystals as bullets, and for a crossbow the arrow is called a bolt, so I was just throwing several things together there, and the word kind of got stuck in my head…

                          The three you picked were probably some of the best on there, we can stick with one of those if everyone else agrees on it!

                          What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                          #118588
                          Mel
                          @melodyjoy

                            @winter_rose

                            Yeah, makes sense. We’ll see what


                            @wingiby-iggiby

                            and


                            @joelle-stone

                            say!

                            MELODY

                             

                            Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                            #118589
                            Mel
                            @melodyjoy

                              @winter_rose

                              ———————————–

                              –“Name for Jedi Warriors”— do not have any political influence. They are just like state police. Their weapons are laser swords and a device that uses black crystals as bullets.

                              Only the captains of the organization have laser swords, and the rest have the blaster that shoots black crystals.

                              The organization is composed only of male warriors.

                              Andor recruited –“Name for Jedi Warriors”— to his cause, and paid them to inspect every person’s background on Mortar, in turn corrupting the whole orginization.

                               


                              @wingiby-iggiby
                              is thinking of incorporating –“Name for Jedi Warriors”— into Kix’s (her character)story, as his father used to be in the –“Name for Jedi Warriors”—, but resigned. After Kix’s father’s death, Kix finds his old robe, tunic and laser sword by accident. Wing is still working out all the kinks in the joining policy for the Cullings in the country Arzoa, but she was thinking Kix could join in place of his father.

                              ———————————–

                              I gathered this info about the Jedi people from the last couple pages and compiled it. I want to post it soon on the details page as soon as we have their name, but is this good? Maybe you could make sure it is revised and I didn’t leave any details out.

                              MELODY

                               

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                              #118590
                              Mel
                              @melodyjoy

                                QUESTION:

                                MENACE 64: that name is for the group of eight winners who decide to go free the losers who are being held captive for some reason.

                                 

                                Are we still doing this?

                                Has it been developed at all?

                                MELODY

                                P.S. I made a list in my notes app of the stuff we still have to post on the details page.

                                -games (we have to put terrains and maybe character qualities in for those I think)

                                -backstory of Andor (still have to decide on Jedi name)

                                So, basically I was saying that even though a player won last, they don’t get eliminated because the Judge thinks that they played well

                                This ^^ are we still doing this?

                                -The 2 new high judges

                                -Jedi people info

                                Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                                #118592
                                Winter Rose
                                @winter_rose

                                  @melodyjoy

                                  Your info all sounds great! Btw, Thanks so much for gathering all of the scattered ideas and organizing them, it’s so much nicer for everything to be in one place!

                                  I believe that we are still doing Menace64, but since it happens near the end of the story I’m not sure what else needs to be developed quite yet.

                                  What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

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