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City Seekers (Seekers of Londima)

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  • #126755
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    *looks at my Sindarin* *cringes* I must fix this:

    Lagoron murmured a word to Radiance, and she halted with ease. He swung a leg over her bare back and landed lightly on the ground, walking forward until Radiance’s nose was nearly over his right un-quivered shoulder. Scratch that, she had hung her head over it and was blowing warm horsey breath in his face.

    “Suilad,” Lagoron said to the stranger, using the Elvish tongue. This was a good way to test the stranger’s species. “Man i eneth lîn?”

    #126756
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone
    #126776
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone @jasmine @kylie-wingfeather

    *scratches head uncertainly* Hmm…. I don’t know if I have the time/brain-power to be on this story a lot. I’M NOT LEAVING! I just think my posts will be a little scarce. But who knows? I might end up being on here more than I see myself doing right now XD

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #126777
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @kylie-wingfeather

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #128059
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    Ok, so, two-day break for Easter, anyone?

    (We’re doing one on another one of my collab. stories, so… Though we haven’t been really doing anything 🙁 )

    "I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.

    #128087
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    HAPPY EASTER!!!!!!!!!!

    He is Risen! Hallelujah!

    "I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.

    #128130
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    Happy Easter! He is risen indeed. 😀

    #128132
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @mischievous-thwapling,

    Okey dokey! Mind if we just bring your character along for a while?

    #130069
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone

    *nods* Of course! And if you need a helping-hand post to get him moving with the others, I can pop in 😉

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #130120
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @mischievous-thwapling,

    *salutes* One question though: Ian ISN’T an Elf, right? Or is he? And you do want him in the prophecy, right?

    *realizes that was three questions* *shrugs*

    #130427
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone

    Right, Ian is a human. And yurp, I believe that was the plan!!

    *grins* I like questions, so hit me with as many as you want! 😛

    "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

    #130496
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @mischievous-thwapling,

    Okay!

    1. Does he have any opinions about Elves/Hhborgens/Puppies/anything-else that we should know about?
    2. Is he normally hospitiable/ready to jump in, or will we have to do a little wheedling to get him to join?
    3. Does he know anything about Londima?
    4. What’s his backstory?

    Hopefully that wasn’t an overload. 😛

    #133544
    Jasmine
    @jasmine

    *dusts forum off*

    Hi guys! I was wondering if anyone had the characters copied, and if they could paste them here? I can’t remember much about Holly’s personality, I feel like it would help if I could see what it was and maybe tweak it a little.

     

     

    Beautiful things don't ask for attention

    #133570
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @jasmine,

    I think there’s some on pg. 1…

    #133623
    Jasmine
    @jasmine

    Hmmmmmm, I found the poems, but not the characters. Oh well, I’ll work with what I got!🙂

    Beautiful things don't ask for attention

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