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City Seekers (Seekers of Londima)

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  • #123701
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @joelle-stone

    Hehe. I forgot the @. 😛

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #123773
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    Ok, so, I was wondering if anyone’s got any ideas about the plot? I have a couple of ideas, but most of ’em take place at the end, so not very helpful. Though I did have one about the smoke that Jason saw; maybe it was from Melian’s camp? What do y’all think?

    ~Kylie

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #123776
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    Nope, not really. We need some action. :/

    Yeah, that might work! ‘Cause @mischievous-thwapling is going to make a new character anyway, right Thwapling? So it might be good to drop Melian off there. 🙂

    "Lacho calad! Drego morn!"

    #123792
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone @kylie-wingfeather

    *guiltily walks into room, head hung* I’m so sorry for being absent for so long!! 🙁 The reason why I was can be summed up in two words: research papers, haha.

    Oh, yes, I was!! I have an idea for him; let me just type him up. Another thing: How should his paths cross with the rest of the characters?

    If your dreams turn to dust... vacuum.
    ~Author Unknown

    #123794
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    ITS HIS FIRE!!! Thwapling’s character is sitting by the fire Jason saw!!! (Or something.) We might be able to pretend like Melian never happened (no offense to Melian lovers). It might make more sense that way. 🙂

    "Lacho calad! Drego morn!"

    #123795
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone

    SMMARRRRT!!! YES! I vote for that. 🙂

    If your dreams turn to dust... vacuum.
    ~Author Unknown

    #123951
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @joelle-stone

    Sounds good to me!

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #124155
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    SO sorry for delay!! I may have…erm…forgot about posting my character.

    Also, I have question: Does this world use made up names or real ones? I’m seeing a mixture with our characters…Anyway, here my character is. 🙂

    Name: (I’m going to wait a day or so before naming him to see if anyone answers my question. If no one does, I’ll just wing it and name him)

    Gender: Male

    Physique: average height; brown eyes; bronze-colored brown hair; straight nose; chink in one eyebrow.

    Personality: reserved until you get to know him–then he’s talkative and humorous; doesn’t pry into people’s business; respectful of authority; procrastinator; enjoys playful teasing with his younger sisters; not really a leader.

    Weaknesses: has a hard time saying “no” or a hard truth; is too eager for revenge.

    Greatest strength: passionate about what he thinks is right/believes.

    Dislikes: nosy people; being blocked from doing what he thinks he should be doing; spicy foods.

    Likes: having a purpose; feeling needed; Spring (the season).


    @joelle-stone
    @kylie-wingfeather @jasmine @wingiby-iggiby (should I tag you???), *tries to remember if I’m missing someone* So sorry if I am…

    If your dreams turn to dust... vacuum.
    ~Author Unknown

    #124161
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    Thwapling,

    Erm? *arches eyebrow* *grins* I’m becoming contagious! 😀

    And yep, we’re using a mix. For Lagoron and the other Elves, I borrowed some of Tolkien’s languages (and Melian is an already used name) and came up with my own Elvish names. The  humans are mostly normal names (Jason, Holly, Nora), but I’ve never heard the name Arla before, and AutoCorrect doesn’t say it’s a word, so that makes it made up for me. 😉

    Anyway, how about your character has the third part of the map? Do you want him to be in the prophecy thingamabob or to just help the original five out? Is he Elvish, human, or something else? He sounds cool!


    @mischievous-thwapling
    @wingiby-iggiby @kylie-wingfeather @jasmine

    "Lacho calad! Drego morn!"

    #124191
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    Hey y’all! I came up with a name (probably going to use it for a story), I looked it up, and apparently it’s not an official name! Anyway, I thought I’d put it up here and see what y’all think.

    Lioryah~ Means: courage, protection/protector. Pronounced: Lee-ore-a. Female.

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #124233
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    Hehe. I looked it up again, and Lioryah is pretty much the same as Liorah, just without the y. Sorry about that.

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #124273
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    Alternative spellings are really cool!! 🙂 Like Mykel and Jairy from Wingfeather Saga. 🙂

    Also, awesome new signature. 🙂

    "Lacho calad! Drego morn!"

    #124343
    Kylie S. Pierce
    @kylie-wingfeather

    @joelle-stone

    Thanks!

    "Bha e fhathast. Agus bha e air a ghràdh." -Am Maor agus an Rìgh Wolf

    #124344
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

    @kylie-wingfeather,

    Sure!


    @mischievous-thwapling
    ,

    Do you want to start us out?

    "Lacho calad! Drego morn!"

    #124530
    Mischievous Thwapling
    @mischievous-thwapling

    @joelle-stone

    Sure! That’d work nicely, too, if he’s in the prophecy-thing/has part of the map, IDC. Also, it’s been forever since I’ve read the story on the Wingfeather Website, so I kinda forgot where my character (human and named Ian, sorry for not mentioning before)  would get the map/how he would know he’s in the prophecy? I mean, will the not know and the others have to tell him?

    Yurpperdoodle (see what i did there?). Writing a post.

     

    If your dreams turn to dust... vacuum.
    ~Author Unknown

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