Brooke

@wingiby-iggiby

That’s almost the saddest backstory I’ve ever heard!! He lost the people he loves most, and then somehow found the will to love again… and lost them to. He must think that love only brings pain. I also noticed that it’s somewhat similar to Darth Vader’s descent story (losing parent, then losing wife), but with enough differenc…[Read more]

K cool

@wingiby-iggiby

@wingiby-iggiby

Yes, naming a place after himself is very villain-like. Let’s do that.

And everything else sounds good, especially competing in every branch; it makes a lot more sense — as does an apprenticeship!

Yes, I agree!

Speaking of ships, what do these look like? And are portals just swirling holes?

One of us could try drawing something. I…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

I like the Neromiro Drake as the villain title and Andor as his “real name”. Cool idea! And glad we finally picked a name for him lol.

Yeah, I think we should allow more than one character per country. I mean, people think Vika’s from the same country as Melody’s characters, so they’ll have to take three or leave…

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@wingiby-iggiby,

Ooh, good idea! That way, people think that the meek Judge Andor is a totally different person than the power-hungry villain, Neromiro Drake. I like it! (I think the Nero name is best as well, BTW).

Yeah, I think we should allow more than one character per country. I mean, people think Vika’s from the same country as Melody’s…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

I meant that the bad-guys get impeded in some way, so they aren’t able to dispose of the losers of the Cullings — so then our guys go in and do a daring rescue

I understood that sentence for like a split second and then my brain crashed… Sorry. Plz help me! **sitting here laughing my head off**

Yes the bad guy will be a guy…[Read more]

@winter_rose

So far there are eight branches of the government, and each has a separate Culling. This might not work properly if we want out characters together though…

Yeah. So I just read through all 8 pages. LOL (took me forever :)) I saw all those categories:

-military

-science

-technology

-diplomats

-judicial branch

-legislative b…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

I wouldn’t worry about it. I mean we use rattlesnake VENOM TO MAKE THE ANTI VENOM and botox is the DEADLIEST NATRUALLY OCCURING POISON IN THE WORLD. You don’t hear that when you need them.

@kylie-wingfeather

Irish Dancing! Yes!! So fun! (:

@rusted-knight

I’m sorry about your chest. I will be praying for it to go well. Can you tag me after it’s over?

I’m glad you’ll still get to join the Marines some day.

@wingiby-iggiby

Ancient Roman surgeons were trained to block out the screams of human pain.

Was surprisingly helpful. Thanks.

@wingiby-iggiby

You’re welcome 😛 And they definitely are!

@wingiby-iggiby

It definitely is!

Yes! I mean, we’re here to develop our characters, not kill them! 😛

Oh, Good! For a second I actually thought you were about to tell me the end of your book!  But you’re right; now that you point that out it reminds me when you had him stop and realized he was acting like Saul, all brawn and being impulsive.

@wingiby-iggiby

Thanks! I’m glad it wasn’t.  And that is so true! In as close to Artham’s words as I can remember:

“The darkness makes only makes the pin-prick of light brighter.” (That isn’t the exact quote, I would have to look it up, but I’m pretty sure that’s the gist of it.)

And your post was great! We really do need to have them sit and…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

That is soo sad! I’m so sorry! 🙁

@kylie-wingfeather

Oh my!  That is so sad and scary!!  I feel so bad for them.

But that’s great about the dancing.  I never did dance or anything like that but I have a cousin who competes in some pretty intense stuff like that.

My week has been pretty good.  Something random I did: I mel…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Thank you! I often feel like I can make my writing a little too dramatic and heavy, so I’m glad you think so! I think I will take Kal, then!

@wingiby-iggiby

Oh yeah! I almost forgot about them! You can totally be Maraly if you want to! I might be Gammon if no one else want to, though when he’s the florid sword I probably will…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Lol, I know. I’m clueless when it comes to that stuff 😛 And yes, Google is an amazing thing!

@everyone

Alright, here’s Colma’s backstory:

Her father was the cook for the king in her world, but the monarchs were tyrants, and the kingdom was in poverty thanks to the royal family.  Only the royal family and noblemen flourished…[Read more]

@winter_rose

I’m not really understanding what you mean by that. Government position? How do you get eliminated? What do you do to not get eliminated?

@wingiby-iggiby

Hope your move goes well! You moving far from where you were before or just in the same-ish area?

Maybe my brain is just fried, but I am confused by your idea as well. Who is…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby,

Hope the moving goes well! I’ve only ever moved once that I remember (twice in my life), and it was exciting but stressful. Have fun!

@writergirl101

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@winter_rose

Good ideas Winter Rose! I agree with them. 😉

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MY PLANET

Name: Rithagua

Random thought LOL: So, the whole planet is one big land mass. There is no water on the surface of the planet at all. How do the inhabitants survive? The core of the planet is…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby,

Exactly!! I made a character in my book with wings just so I could experiment with that… 🙂

@wingiby-iggiby

I know, right?! Artham is probably my favorite character or at LEAST in the top 3.

@kylie-wingfeather

She sounds really cool!

Who do y’all think I should be? I’m thinking about Kal, but I’m not sure. Any ideas?