Brooke

P.S. @wingiby-iggiby

I was looking at the copy of this story my mom made, and you said something about Silvia getting a silver necklace because of her namesake or something. Actually, Silvia means Spirit of the Wood, which, after starting to learn Latin, I guess I probably should have known because silva, silvae means woods, forest in Latin. I…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling,

Phew, good! I’m always so worried ’bout that. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy,

Ha, really? Sadiq’s the only pet I’ve had in my story so far, except one planned for far into the future, but I think that rule might apply for me too… 😛 The animals so don’t deserve what the humans get! 😛

@wingiby-iggiby,

Lol, right? You hardly…[Read more]

@jasmine

Love your signature, btw!

@everyone

Thank you for complementing my fourth-wall breaking XD It was so fun!

@joelle-stone

You did a fantastic job of portraying Konyar!!!

@wingiby-iggiby

Well, it was an educated bet XD

@rose-colored-fancy

Aw, thank you!!! (Honestly, I can’t wait to find out more about them, lol! They’re pretty…[Read more]

@joelle-stone / @kylie-wingfeather @wingiby-iggiby @jasmine

Sounds good to me, Kinnan. 🙂

@winter_rose

Wow… You must’ve put so much work into those! TYSM!

@joelle-stone @melodyjoy @wingiby-iggiby Winter Rose
So… rereading this, I noticed a few mix-ups. I thought Allor was winning Scientific, not Diplomatic, though I’m fine if he does win the latter instead. 🙂

And one losing character was missed… Allor’s twin sister, Wren.…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Thank you!!!   And I never would have known that you struggled with battle scenes had you not told me!

Thank you! When I read my first battle scenes, I cringe. A lot. So that means I’ve improved, right? XD

Ha ha, thank you! I get my best ideas when I’m not trying to think of any, so that was one of them.   Also, Liorah is so tough…

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@wingiby-iggiby

I just wanted to say I love how much you make the battle come alive for Liorah!

Thank you so much! You’re doing a great job with Kiark and Wylo! I usually struggle with battle scenes, so I’m glad you like it!

Also, poison is an amazing idea! I can’t wait to see how that works out!

@this-is-not-an-alien

“Octopuses are living s…

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@wingiby-iggiby
I like the idea of split up for a short time but also like @joelle-stone said. Maybe if they split up when the castle produces clones or shows their deepest fears or something that they each individually face then small groups would magnify it but right now they’re probably stuck with each other XD.

@wingiby-iggiby

Hi Wingiby,

I was going to respond, but then I lost all of my very important edits!!! I don’t have time to fix them right now, so I’ll try to get on again when I have a moment. So sorry for the delay!

Of course, perfectly alright! It’s so annoying when that happens.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Hi Cathy,

I just wanted to say you…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Hi Wingiby,

Thank you so much! That helps a ton!

Please excuse Liorah for being so terribly rude. She insisted, and I couldn’t stop her. *Long, suffering sigh.*

Honestly, I love the way you’re writing Kiark! He’s a really great character, as is Wylo! I loved that part you wrote about Wylo, it was fascinating!

I can’t wait to…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby,

👍 And Merry Christmas to you as well! 🙂 (Excellent post, BTW).

@rose-colored-fancy,

Aw, thank you! I can honestly say that this is extremely different than anything I’ve ever written. It is definitely stretching my imagination. 😉 Although I myself am not blind (although I do have pretty horrible eyesight), it’s interesting to…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Princess Dramatic bumped into Riure very unprincessly.

LOL! I love that! XD. I think I’ll be referring to Liorah as Princess Dramatic from now on.😂😂

@joelle-stone

If this was a dream, it was the best one she’d ever had, even if she couldn’t see in it. Most dreams she could see, but now and again the images were blurry. It…

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@joelle-stone @wingiby-iggiby @melodyjoy @winter_rose

As Kinnan knows, I’m back. 🙂

@backwardslivewriter

Ooh! Can’t wait to see how Liorah will respond to that! (There’s no magic in my world, so that could get interesting)

@joelle-stone

Thank you so much! As for not doing anything stupid, I can’t promise anything there.😂

@wingiby-iggiby

Thank you so much for answering my questions! It really helps a lot!

 And btw, I love…

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@joelle-stone

Sounds good!

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@melodyjoy @joelle-stone @wingiby-iggiby @mischievous-thwapling

I had another idea for the military branch, let me know what you think…

So maybe the characters get a small squadron of robots to fight for them, and then they and their team get like an hour to study the battlefield-arena and map out a battle p…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby,

Yay, thanks! I honestly am quite happy with exploring  how to write a blind person. And, you know, Riure just kind of… came out. 😛 Other than her constant laughing. That was planned (hence the name, lol).

@rusted-knight

Yay! I’m so glad I can still join!

@joelle-stone

Thanks for the welcome and thank you!

@wingiby-iggiby

Hi Wingiby! Nice to see you! I do have some questions XD Is the castle set in the middle ages, modern times, or both? And I’d love to know what’s going on a bit, just so I can get my character started 🙂 Also, how does the…[Read more]

@melodyjoy @winter_rose @wingiby-iggiby @mischievous-thwapling

Mel: Good idea! Very helpful. Hm… *studies data*

Ok, y’all, looks like the Technology Branch is fine with everyone. We have a lot of good ideas for the other branches, and I think Diplomacy works fine. Maybe whoever wins it (I think Thwapling?) can decide whether they’re supposed…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy,

Welcome aboard! Nice signature, BTW. 🙂

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Excellent posts; loved them!

@wingiby-iggiby,

Wow. You portray both different POVs so well. I can honestly say that I’ve never seen someone use two different POVs at the same time, keep them straight and easy to understand, and not do other head-jumping at the…[Read more]