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Esther Sears replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Okay, first of all, I’M SO SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG 🙁 🙁 The last couple weeks have been rough ones, and in all the chaos I somehow forgot all about this 🙁 But I just finished reading the second part!! 😀 (And I KNOW I gave you my comments from the first part, but when I went to look I couldn’t find them? Did you ever get…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant I really don’t think what seem like similarities to ET matter at all. You really only have a few surface level similarities. Even the “sharing wounds” is more like “when the alien gets sick, the main character gets sick” in the movie.
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Sam M replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
First off, I enjoyed your story -thanks for letting me read it. 🙂
I do have a few suggestions:
#1 I feel like your story could benefit from more showing and less telling. For example, when Wendy is in the woods, instead of saying she’s scared, you could do something like: “Wendy’s breath became strained as they rushed further…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant I’m glad I could be useful! By ET, I meant the movie, not trying to imply the creature was an alien. Like, the “befriend a child, share wounds with it, looong fingers, adults don’t really know what’s going on, hospital tries to contain it, escape, happy ending for benevolent misunderstood creature.” Which is also very different from…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant As far as I’m aware, not in the same exact functionality with editing and commenting and decent privacy settings built into a tolerantly responsive editor.
There’s always pastebin for simple sharing, though other people can’t comment on the page. There’s the online version of MS Word, which probably functions similarly to Google…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant That link doesn’t work. It looks like a download link from an email inbox, which isn’t going to work for anyone not logged into your account. Most people around here host on Google Docs and then use the link sharing function in it.
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Sooooo saaaaaadddddd!!!!!!
Loki just made me very sad. . . seeing the way that was portrayed. . . . . *breaks down again*
And Civil war. . . me and my friend were talking about poor Bucky today. . . the poor guy. . . *realizes this might seem like I’m implying things about him*
*decides to stop talking* xD
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
*is speechless*
Just watched Thor and Civil War this weekend.
I. Am. Dying. Still.
Gotta say, those movies were great. . . *silent tear falls*
My heart. . . My head . . .*groans* Help me!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant Nope! And yep! I can’t stand the people who are all like “ew, the prequels are awful! They’re cheesy and blah blah.”
I thought the acting was phenomenal. The actors did an awesome job of making their character memorable, and can we just take a minute to appreciate Ewan McGregor and Liam Neeson??
The story-line was awesome as well!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
*nods*
From the movies I’ve seen (the three prequels, Rogue One, and the Rise of Skywalker), I think you’re right. They kinda seemed to be running out of steam. Though to be honest? I really enjoyed tRoS. And I think I’m not going to enjoy the original trilogy as much as I enjoyed the prequels. Idk why, but that’s what I feel…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
*nods* I’m planning on doing that at some point… I simply haven’t the time at the moment, nor anywhere to watch them. We don’t have a TV, or a Netflix account or anything. I’ll probably end up watching them at my aunt’s or grandparents’ 🙂 But also I want to finish the rest of the Star Wars movies before I start on another…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
@vivian-grant *distressed fangirl noises*
Which story? Yours? (not picking up on the hint though XD) I did, and it’s awesome!! Let’s see… I think I had some comments but I think I forgot them. -_-
Um. I like Owl!! I would love to read more about him. And I like the witch lady and her friend/lover/whoever (forgot his name). I can’t decide if…[Read more]
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PenSword replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the link! I’ll have to read a story or two sometime.
I have not actually written anything I’d call horror yet, although I have some ideas. I could see how that’d be difficult though. I think with other stories I’ve gotten the advice of focusing more on what the characters are feeling, rather than what…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Oh my word yes!!!! Some of the best of the best quotes!!!!
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Fine then, XD Marvel. Favorite Marvel villain. XD Which now that I think about it, is actually true. XD XD
Winter Soldier has a soundtrack that I’ve been listening to on loop for a while now. XD It’s just that good! I also find myself listening to “End of the Line” which is the saddest song in the soundtrack probably. 🙂
I laughed…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
*has tears in eyes again* SPOILER ALERT FOR ANYONE READING THIS WHO HAS NOT SEEN THE MOVIES: Bucky. . . . *breaks down again with no sign of stopping*
LOKI THO!!!!!!!!! He’s mah favorite villain of all time!!!!
I’ve seen The first Avenger, Winter soldier, The Avengers, and Age of Ultron. Planning on watching Civil War next, or…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Okay! Thank you for the warning! XD
*has just finished Winter soldier the other day and is STILL in denial*
I TOLD MY SISTER THAT WE DIDN’T HAVE PROOF THAT THAT CHARACTER DIED!!!! I TOLD HER HE COULD HAVE SURVIVED!!!!! BUT SHE SAID THERE WAS NO WAY!!!! AND THEN I WAS RIGHT BUT IDK IF IT’S BETTER OR WORSE THIS WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Gotta be honest here: It’s Tony Stark. XD Even tho he has practically no filter, he’s (always) and still is my favorite character.
I’ve heard of Avatar: the Last Airbender probably once in my entire life. XD XD
Who’s your favorite Marvel character? XD
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
I enjoy a lot of writing and drawing, which isn’t as good as I like to pretend it is. XD
I like hanging out with my friends, reading in a quiet corner, listening to music and dancing.
I’m very much introverted, but am actually way bouncier then I seem at first glance. XD XD
I also very much enjoy watching movies. All kinds, but…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
XD XD *Laughing my face off*
Pirates are great. XD XD XD
What kind of things do you like to do?
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