Vivian Grant

@urwen-starial

I haven’t read the books, though I want to, but I have watched the first two Dreamworks movies. It’s neat that people can find similarities between my characters and other characters, but I didn’t consciously base the witch off of anyone.

Just a heads-up to anyone and everyone who reads the story, I’m very open to constructive…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14  @urwen-starial

Alright, here is the first half. Enjoy!
<p style=”text-align: center;”>He Will Come</p>
                The prison of Tyastin city was neither particularly kind, nor particularly cruel, but of course, like with all prisons, everyone of sound mind preferred to steer clear of it. It stood just outside Tyastin…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14  @urwen-starial

You can read it whenever you like– I am just making it available for you and anyone else who comes across this thread and becomes interested in beta-reading it.

(Have you watched the TV show Once Upon A Time?)

@anne_the_noob14

Annie: *Overhears how Dharin’s name is spelled* Oh boy, there he goes.

Dagger: Ann-aye, why the blazes does everyone in your world have random letters thrown into their names? I swear, your lot are mad.

Annie: I don’t think Dharin’s from my world.

Dagger: You mean D-Harin. There is an ‘H’ in his name, and by deuce I am going…[Read more]

@urwen-starial

Dagger: I hate it when that happens. See, Ann-aye? This laddie understands me.

Annie: You didn’t have chocolate chips on your ship!!

Alright, providing a link to an accessible document is not an option right now, as the fellow who would usually help me with figuring such tech-y stuff out is unavailable. So I’m going to do the old-fashioned copy and paste the text itself onto a post.

Would you prefer to read a thriller short story (don’t worry, it’s not full-on horror like The…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Thank you! Yes, I have seen the PotC. I loved the first and second movies, I think that the third could have been saved with some tweaks in the story plot, the fourth was a little jump-the-shark but still enjoyable, and the fifth was definitely jump-the-shark. I hope that they don’t make a sixth, because the first two (and three)…[Read more]

@urwen-starial @anne_the_noob14

Me: …Dagger?

Dagger: On it, darling. *Plants himself by Kirat* Come come, laddie, you’re making the authors nervous, and we all know what happens when the bosses feel insecure.

Annie: *Sees Dharin (@anne_the_noob14) throw a smile and wink  at Rhioe (@urwen-starial)* Great. Dagger, hide me.

Dagger: You are…[Read more]

@urwen-starial

Thank you for letting me know. I’ll keep working on it. 🙂

@urwen-starial

Alright, I honestly hope that this works. Otherwise I will find a way to provide a better link.

file:///C:/Users/Kids/OneDrive/The%20Smilers%20of%20Carmadyne%20(submission%20version).docx

@urwen-starial

It is also pretty low on my priority list as of now. I do have some fantasy short stories that could use a second pair of eyes, however.

@urwen-starial

Unfortunately, I only have the story very roughly drafted out, and there are only some disconnected scenes from various points in the story that I typed out in order to remember.

Dagger: And how many hours a day again have I wasted trying to get her to write it out?

Me: Oi, you don’t get to comment here.

Dagger: Of course not.…[Read more]

@urwen-starial

That sounds cool! I’ve had a couple of werewolf-related story and character ideas, but not something like Sunwolves.

Annie lives in the normal world until she stumbles through a passage through to a new world, which I can only explain as a very much more serious and darker version of Wonderland. The first person she meets in that…[Read more]

@urwen-starial

Mind if I ask what kind of story Kirat and Rhioe are from?

@urwen-starial

Dagger: A pleasure to meet you as well, lad. *Watches Rhioe leave the room* Quite the aura I must have, eh?

Me: I gave you computer privileges, and I can take them away too…

Annie *Enters the room*: Well, I personally don’t blame her for leaving.

Annie is another one of my characters, from the same story as Dagger.