WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!

Rest in Him

I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
A…[Read more]

Here’s this week’s.

Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine

Blown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]

Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂

Thank You for Forgiving Me

Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more]

I LOVE IT!!

Your story is so thrilling and well-written. It always leaves me on the edge of my seat!

Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!

This week’s is one that I wrote more recently.  It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.

As usual,…[Read more]

Ooooooo yikes… I’ve got chills…. 😀 I love it!!

Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A

And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂

My…[Read more]

This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!

Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more]

Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]

Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]

Two poems this week!

This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]

Ok, wait wait wait.  What is happening?!  I need more!! 🙏🙏😃  You can’t just stop there…😁

Great job, btw!  I love reading these.  It’s such a cool idea and you managed to pull it off without adding any gore/language.  Two thumbs up!!👍👍

Another awesome part!! Looking forwards to reading more!! 🙂 🙂

This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!

Watchmen (Sound it Loud)

Watchman,…[Read more]

Awesome work!!! I’m more intrigued by this story all the time! I’ve been waiting for this! Keep writing!

Hey guys!

Yeah I know. I tagged like a billion people. LOL. But I want all of ya to read it! 🙂

If I didn’t tag you FEEL FREE to read and comment! (In fact, please do 🙂 )

(for all you who I told I w…[Read more]

I love how you are developing both Liz and Diane’s personalities… And ooh, now I’m curious about Liz’s backstory. 😉

Cool and cooler! Keep up the good work! I really love Diane!! She’s so sweet!

AND I just read your 3rd portion! **Thumbs up**

I liked how you portray Diane’s character and personality. You do a great job of showing how she is really shy and quiet/reserved 🙂

Is this going to be a long book-type story, or is it going to be a short story? Just wondering’ (cause I love your work so far! 🙂

MEL

Hello! I really enjoyed reading the second portion of your story!!! Great job!

One thing I enjoy when reading your story is that even though you are writing in 3rd person, I almost feel like it is written in 1st because you help readers picture her and know what she is thinking and going through.

MEL

Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂

Torchlighters

Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more]

You have a wonderful way of expressing things with your words. I really enjoyed reading the new portion! Great job! I especially liked the part about detracting attention by attracting it in a totally different way. Super cool. 👍:D

Nice!! I love it!

Random thing: She’s a beekeeper?! 😀 My mom has kept bees for about 9 years? Give or take? So anyways I always find it cool to come across characters and “real” people alike who at least have some correct knowledge of bees 🙂

Awesome part!! I love your writing style. The description is so good! Looking forward to more parts 😉

Also, you mentioned how you had the scene in your head but didn’t really have a plot or purpose. My story I am working on right now kinda has the same issues. I had a really awesome (sorta lol) first scene and I got that all written and I also have some other cool parts that I can’t wait to write later on in the book but transitioning is…[Read more]

I really enjoyed reading your story! I love your writing style. The suspense and mystery of the story and the way you wrote it kept me “on the edge of my seat” 🙂

I think it is so awesome how so many people on SE play the violin. I do to. I enjoy playing it. Another reason why I love this story, because I can relate to just a little part of…[Read more]

I really enjoyed reading your story! I love your writing style. The suspense and mystery of the story and the way you wrote it kept me “on the edge of my seat” 🙂

I think it is so awesome how so many people on SE play the violin. I do to. I enjoy playing it. Another reason why I love this story, because I can relate to just a little part of…[Read more]

Ok that was EPIC!! I love this kinda thing! I love reading stuff that gets my blood pumping. And killers with musical instruments is totally my thing 😆 LOL

I likeall of @claire-h ‘s suggestions. 🙂

Here’s a thought I had for a direction that you <i>could</i> take this: maybe Liz is a an assassin whose boss gives her assignments and she kills people without really knowing them. Then she ends up killing someone she…[Read more]

You’re welcome! 😀

OOOooooooo ok so I really love this?? That was really good!! 😀 😀

As far as suggestions go, I agree with what Claire already said about the different questions you could ask yourself. And reading through it again, Judy hit me as someone who could be pivotal, if you wanted her to be. She seems like she could know things. 🙂

Great job!! 😀

This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]

YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.

This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]

This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]

This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

Awaken the Dawn
Up the pale granite heights I climb.…[Read more]

That sounds pretty cool! I’ll have to add it to my reading list! *ignores fact that said list is already too long*

I haven’t heard if Hurt Go Happy or Counted Worthy but they sound pretty cool! I’ve heard of the Scarlet Pimpernel series, but not what it’s about. Chronicles of Narnia and Sherlock Holmes are pretty epic, tho! And so is LotR! I’ve only managed to get through it once, tho. XP The books are a…[Read more]

Good work, both of you!