Hey anybody else want to help revive this thread?

@mayacat

Great answer btw

Would your character rather kiss a frog to break a curse, or have to become the frog to break the curse?…[Read more]

@storysmith you mentioned you were into digital art and stuff, so you might enjoy this.

@the-fledgling-artist

@ria

@urwen-starial

If anyone is interested, please join!

If you all want to have a meeting and look at this thing and where we want it to go. I’m down. I think we really should all discuss it together. And any ideas you all want to put on the table are welcome.

@kayla-skywriter

As the instigator of this madness, I have to say that I’m…[Read more]

Hi guys. Unfortunately I think I have to step out. I really enjoyed this and I’d love to continue, but I don’t have the time I wish I had to give to this. So I’m officially leaving this project.

@dakota I know we were in the middle of a collaboration, and if I could…[Read more]

I totally feel you, I’m trying to get through senior year as well, along with dance commitments, inktober anddd trying to still write semi-consistently, so I totally understand XD

I really want to continue with the story, as I love it dearly, and I really hope we can make it happen. I’m not sure when I have consistent times that…[Read more]

Hey everybody. I know it’s been a really really long time and I apologize for that. Between getting a job, trying to finish my senior year of highschool and a adding a boyfriend to the mix, things have been pretty crazy for me. But I wanted to rally the troops…[Read more]

WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

Hi, I’m sorry for intruding but I just wanted to say that’s amazing! I love how you mixed the colors, it creates a kinda iridescent effect! I love it!

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

Hi everyone!

I finally finished a new part for my personal characters. I’m aware it’s been a while, and this part has been half-finished for quite some time, so I apologize. This takes place a day or so after the murder of Wes. (Italics also aren’t transferring via…[Read more]

Redid Phoenix’ face. This is the new version 🙂 :

BTW this is not my art. I used ArtBreeder for this. 🙂

And here’s Kedori’s! Gosh I love these two cinnamon rolls

^the drawing’s one I made of him at 10 with his mom, btw

This one’s Kiet’s:

^@chalice did the awesome portraiture in it a;sldgkh

Guess…[Read more]

@naiya-dyani @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat

And here’s Rob’s face. I did his college a while ago, so it didn’t make it into it. I might remake it . . .

@urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani

This is the final part!!

Megyn returned with the doctor at her side. Kedori reluctantly stepped back as they surrounded his friend.

They’ll help him, he told himself. It’s going to be okay. Kiet will get better. He has to.

As the…[Read more]

Next Kiet/Megyn/Kedori part:

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The drab granite walls of the hospital rose out of the drifts of dirty snow ahead. Megyn shivered as another gust of wind drove its fingers through her clothing. She pressed her lips together as she glanced back at…[Read more]

I found a face for my grumpy peep! 😉 I bet ya she’d be really mad if I called her that to her face. *laughing evilly*

And lastly, Megyn’s collage!! *hugs her too* The FRMS symbol I can give to anyone who has or will have a FRMS charrie.

The collage for my doctor peep. *goes and gives him a hug*

And the next Megyn/Kedori/Kiet part.

“You want me to release him from the Tower?” the Warden exclaimed. He twisted around as he strode ahead of her, eyes rounded in shock.

“Only temporarily,” she assured him, almost sprinting trying to keep up…[Read more]

And this is his brother whom none of you know yet 🙂 :

This is Zenyth. w/o the mask:

Here’s Rosetta’s introduction:

The chime of a clock broke the late morning silence. Rosetta sighed, shifting her feet in the thickly drifted snow. “An hour late.” she murmured. Her eyes flicked to the alleyway. “Jordan, where are you? The sparrow meeting was…[Read more]

Next Kedori/Kiet/Megyn part!

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Their footsteps echoed in the hall, hollow and haunting. Megyn glanced around as they passed the same cells, the same prisoner’s faces. Some stared at her with the same dead-while-alive expression. Others stared at…[Read more]

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

Everyone else: @urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @naiya-dyani @mayacat

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The precinct had seen better days. When the building had first been built the walls had stood proudly at attention, but now they seemed to…[Read more]

The next part for Logan and Rhioe:

Logan took a deep breath and shifting Rhioe’s weight slightly on his back. He was in this deep. He had no choice now but to tell her.

“You- you look a lot like someone I knew. . . my sister actually.” he sighed heavily. Tears…[Read more]

Korynth/Ian/Jin and random tower guard that anyone can use later if they want 🙂 :

The air was frosty inside the stone walls as Guard 347 slouched sullenly near a torch on the wall. Opposite him, Guard 501 stared down at the floor, wincing whenever the scream of a…[Read more]

And a collage of my grumpiest peep.

AAAAaaaand I have a new character. Here’s her collage. Her description is also in the doc. Please take a look and lemme know what you think 🙂 :

I had posted Jordan’s collage, but when Story Embers updated it was gone. So I’m posting it again here: 🙂

His description is in the doc now.

Alright Everabody!!! I know this has been a long time coming and I apologize for that. Here’s what Zenyth and Sandyra have been doing all this time. @esmeralda-gramilton and I wrote this together. I’ll *** to show pov change. Thank you so much Esmeralda for working with me on this. It…[Read more]

Okay, here is a collage for Tisha. What do you think?

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Pasha stared at the door.

It didn’t move.

The large dog sighed, chest lifting of the ground before settling back in a new spot. Stay. Wait. That was what his boy had– his master had said. Yes, his master had t…[Read more]

@naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter I added in some Pasha. Hopefully I did okay! : |

The wind drove yesterday’s snow across the road into her pony tailed hair as Megyn sprinted towards the Sector 2 gate. Hopefully I’m not keeping him waiting, she thought as she brushed stray…[Read more]

Time to set up for some pain, darlings *rubs hands*

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The footsteps receded down the staircase. Gerik gritted his teeth, head whirling. Kiet had sounded so–honest. For those few minutes, he had sounded just like a frightened boy in over his…[Read more]

@naiya-dyani And Part Three!

As she tipped back the flask and set it aside, her eye caught a glimpse of Kiet’s face, pinched with pain. She winced as she selected a small cloth from her now-open kit. No matter how necessary this was to heal his wound, she k…[Read more]

The next part @dakota and I wrote!

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Cell 860, 861, 862 . . .

Megyn winced as they passed cell after cell. The prisoners here seemed so. . . empty. Like souls living in death, and yet alive. Most didn’t even glance at them as they passed. The few tha…[Read more]

@urwen-starial Where is Era? If you don’t mind I was going to have Pasha meet up with…[Read more]

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

Okay, peeps, @naiya-dyani  and I have been working on what happens next with Megyn, Kiet and Kedori . . . and here is part one. Hope this is good. 🙂 (dashes indicate POV switch

As the young woman walked past the gates, Kedori sucked in a breath through…[Read more]

Here’s the newest part for Chance:

Chance picked his violin up from where he had laid it on the floor. As he looked at it his lips quivered and a tear dropped onto it’s shining wood. He knelt down beside the violin case and laid the violin careful inside. A…[Read more]

That…

Was…

Beautiful.

Thank you for putting that up. Definitely made my day. Thank you!

Good job! I like it!

Hi Peoples!

I started this thread to post some of my depressing poetry that i like to write. Typically it is lyrical poetry. It’s not very good so you will have plenty to call out a critique. If anyone else has any depressing poetry to post you are…[Read more]

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]