Cathy

@mischievous-thwapling

*Picks you up off the floor and hands you ice-cream, saying, ‘it seems we always eat ice-cream when we run into each other on here,’ and then, ‘if you really don’t want to have to read all of that, I can give you a short summary!’*

SHORT SUMMARY:

All our characters have been lounging about in the tunnel after the fight.…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

(also he’s just so great for pushing plot bc anything I need to add all I have to say is Ehud did it and no further explanation is required like right now the plan is he stole top secret files which catalyzes the whole political intrigue bringing everyone together (at least in theory) and then he completely forgets where he p…

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“Denied.” Isaac already had an answer. “Reason one, I have ranged weapons, explosives and knives, and I know how to use them well. Reason two, you lack any knowledge of the man’s position. This castle changes. Rooms that used to be joined won’t be when you return. Which leads to reason three. If you leave, there is a better chance of you not retur…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

*makes panicked gurgling noise* AAAAHHHHHHHHHH! So infinitely sorry! *throws self at your feet, sobbing* Can thou EVER EVER find it in thine heart to forgive me? And the same with you all? *turns to everyone else, hands clasped together*

*ahem* Okay, so…that was my dramatic reaction for the night.

EVERYONE:

As I more or less…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

 

Sweet as he was, Ehud also had this pretty rebellious streak, especially when he thought he could help if he persisted. Her demand guaranteed he wasn’t going to comply.

I loved that part! The part where it said, “Her demand guaranteed he wasn’t going to comply.” reminded me of my three-year-old b…[Read more]

Nithel took a step nearer Alessio, and planted himself there. He wanted to be near his friend. But realizing what that might have looked like, he looked toward Isaac and nodded.

Nithel began readying his mind to treat Isaac like a leader. He didn’t feel anything from the man, he couldn’t read him. Like Gabrel, though their personalities were…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

You and Rose say Dancrow, so Dancrow it is!!! I’m actually glad, bc I think he is the one who needs most of the development out of the 3. 😉

@rose-colored-fancy

IKR!? Every time I mention to my family that a character ‘surprised me’ or I ‘found out something new’ or they ‘won’t cooperate’, I get comments like “But.. You thought the…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

WOW. Oh, wow. That was intense. I feel so sorry for her 😭 Poor thing! As far as I understand, her greatest fear is that she might harm Ehud, or that she’s too broken to ever be loved. Oh, goodness!😭

Ehud held up a cat that was trying to scratch his eyes out, but for reason this idiota thinks that’s an endearing t…

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Dominic crept his door open and glanced down each hall franticly.

He stepped out, shut his door and took off running down the hall. Again, it was to the left, the way he came. The hall ended in a familiar staircase.

He remembered that once he got up the stairs, it was a hall filled with paintings then ended with two doors.

The two doors stared…[Read more]

“I’m sorry,” the princess replied. A tentative hand found its way onto Riure’s arm. “Do you have any other family? I have a mother and my uncle, but they’re always so busy.” Her voice trailed off, then she seemed to shake herself. “And I have an older brother, Gavril.”

Riure smiled. The brother who was almost as ugly as the beasts they’d fought…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy,

Thx for the extra stuff on Gavril! It makes it a lot easier for me to correctly write stuff. 😉 And I think he and Riure will get along just fine (honesly, is there anyone Riure doesn’t get along with, lol?). 🙂 He sounds awesome; I love him already. 😉

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ahem. I am a very lax Grammar Nazi, but one all…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ah yes, they be people what call ‘em “Grammar Nazis” and it be so fun to talk grammatically incorrectly!

LOL That sentence made my skin crawl XD I must be a Grammar Nazi too XD

Oh, how do you insult someone in Dutch?

Hmm, mostly some combination of “dom” (dumb) “stom” (stupid) “idioot” (idiot). It’s pretty hard to give a com…[Read more]

“I have a big nose.”

Riure slapped  hand to her mouth, but a giggle still escaped. At least the princess wasn’t trying to impress her. All the same, Riure couldn’t tell if it was meant as a joke or if it was just the first thing that came to Princess Liorah’s mind.

“I really do,” the princess protested. “Umm, I’m tall enough that lots of boys…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you so much! I love how Liorah is really bossy confident, but she’s actually so insecure. I discovered that pretty recently, so I have to change a lot of things in the book.

LOL! Don’t you just love it when your characters surprise you? Like I read in an article on here, we should actually call our characters “people” bec…[Read more]

“Do…In your world do people usually have…powers or are accepted with their powers?”

Nithel looked toward his friend. The youth spoke as if he knew of magic. As if powersshould be accepted. OR at least he wished they were. 

What did he mean by power– Nithel’s lips tightened against each other.

“Yes,” Brendin set down the book and raised his s…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

He’s been pretty messed up, but at heart Brendin is a pretty friendly guy and tends to act like an older brother to everyone.  And he can (try to) help Alessio with fire magic.

On the shipping subject though, Brendin does have a person he’s in love with…but because of the damage to his soul he has no idea she even exists or…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Lol, watching you interact with your characters is so much fun! 😀

And yup! Actually, Virtus is going for the person in my profile pic, Marina. She tries to ignore him. XD

Alessio passed the book to Virtus. Nithel stood quietly behind Alessio, waiting.

“I was looking for any maps or clues about this place. The most effectual means of finding a way out would be to accumulate resources and systemize a strategy based off that.”

Nithel blinked once, Such strange words. He had never met someone who spoke that way. Ale…[Read more]

Wow, y’all, I love what’s happening.

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Lol, you made me laugh with your last post. Yeah, I just found out that Virtus is not the patient read-through-a-whole-book-in-one-sitting type person. XD (And actually, he’s “in love” with another character from my book, not Lytt, although he is friends with her. But don’t change your…[Read more]

“It’s nobody’s business,” he said staring at each one of them individually. “Whoever you are we’re all stuck together now and if we start prying into the other’s secrets we’ll tear each other apart. Then we’ll all die, understand?”

Brendin snatched the book from the boy, flipping quickly back to the page with his name across it.  He thought he’…[Read more]