luciusbraun

Quin

He walked away from Niarok, into the darkness of the cave, and stood, staring vacantly into the shadows. Memories flooded his brain, and for once he didn’t try to shove them away. It hurt too much to even protest, so he let the pain slide down across the few short months since It happened, through the memories.

<The horse’s scream>–he…[Read more]

Sahar

The girl’s brother knelt beside the stream, washing the blood out of his clothes and off his skin.

I only hoped he wouldn’t try to drink it. Hopefully, he knew enough. I wasn’t about to warn him until I was sure he was about to drink it. I didn’t want to come across as a know-it-all.

He tasted the water, but carefully, like he knew what…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

OK, it makes sense now! Thanks for telling me about the crossed out sentences. That was sweet, and I don’t even know these characters as well as others who have been here longer. 🙂  You employed lots of vivid colors to aid your descriptions–good move!!

@noah-cochran

it would be scary if anybody did live in an area of…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

baby blue

Do people have blue babies where you live? That can’t be a good thing…xD

🙂 I’m assuming you are using that adjective to mean the sky is young.

Thank you!! Lol I was pretty ambivalent to that song until I was writing this scene XD now it’s a beautiful song XD Yep it’s Spanish *probably; I don’t speak Spanish so I’m just going with clips of Spanish I find in books or subtitles or warnings..sometimes I even have to resort to Google Translate!*
Ah, I cross the sentences out that they do…[Read more]

*thumbs up*

@rose-colored-fancy

Also the Yila and Lorcan flirting is going spectacularly and I’m here for it!!!

LOL thanks I’m having so much fun hahahaha😂 never thought I’d do this cause in real life Lorcan already has a significant other. I will call this practice for the real thing.

Get ready to hear loads of Irish terms of endearment. They’re gonna be…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Sahar sounds like a more honest version of Quin, here, interestingly enough–feeling useless is the only thing he’s any good at anymore. (for now, that is).

That was actually very beautiful, but sad to read. You know, Sahar should punch Acyn some time…

LOL, I love Acyn but I have to agree he’s occasionally very punchable XD (Like…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Talk to me! What should I do? Should I go ahead and use Fern? Or should I create a new character? What’s a short rundown of where the story is now? What should I do? 😀

@joelle-stone

OOOOOOH I’M NOW VERY EXCITED TO JOIN!!!!!

I’ll show back up in like a week with a character that will be super cool and it will be great and hmmm…

*starts plotting*

Okay so yeah…

I just saw how long that post actually ended up being and I fell reallly bad now…

Heyyyy everyone! Funn fact, I’ve been driving all the way across the US the past few days, hence why I just disappeared from cyber-space… Lol sooo I’m back now but even though y’all are awesome I’m not going to directly respond to anything right now because I need to sleep and eat food and generally find methods of not dying while trying to be a…[Read more]

Aw poor you! *hugs while safely social-distancing lol*

LOL this year my mom already bought my brother all the Christmas ideas I had for him whaaa! Oh gift-cards sounds fun, maybe I should try that…

HAHA I CANNOT WAIT!!!!!!

Lorcan

Lorcan watched the situation unfold. The boy – Niarok – held his sister as she winced in pain. Her face was shining with sweat and her breathing seemed laboured. She was clearly getting worse.

Quin moved past him, his face stricken. Lorcan had of course heard every word he had said. Including the last part.

Amputation.

Lorcan clenched…[Read more]

Cool. I think I might just create my own and then go from there! Could you maybe summarize what’s happening since I was never a part of this story on the Wingfeather forum so I’ve got absolutely no clue what’s happening?

So our five characters (Lagoron the elf (me), Holly the minstrel (Jasmine), Jason the boy (originally OREO’s, but she’s not h…[Read more]

Hey Denali!! Yep, we’re still very much alive, but I’m not quite sure what happened to Fern… we had one post of hers and one of her Guarded’s (Brook, I think?), and we’ve gotten quite a ways ahead of that. :/

@rose-colored-fancy

Sahar sounds like a more honest version of Quin, here, interestingly enough–feeling useless is the only thing he’s any good at anymore. (for now, that is).

That was actually very beautiful, but sad to read. You know, Sahar should punch Acyn some time…

Good luck with Nano! 🙂

Sahar

The girl was getting heavy. At first she had seemed to listen to me talking, but gradually, she’d grown more and more detatched. Not a good sign.

Acyn had told me that being unconcious was usually worse, so I did everything I could to keep her present. That mostly involved talking. A lot. I was good at that, but gradually my words had lost…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Haha I know right !!

LOL, for some reason the philosophy always gets pulled out with Acyn, Faye, and Chantara (For some reason?? She’s a villain?? Why?)

Thank youu, he is my favourite character. I get excited just thinking about him! One can only hope that Liorah stays out of his life permanently so that she can’t p…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

Good writing! I like this scene. And I was actually just thinking of this song!!! But this is prettier than the version I heard. The Spanish is a good touch.  (I didn’t make a fool of myself and get the language wrong, did I?!)

Why do you cross certain sentences out?