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@emily-waldorf

t was really fun, to read through all your characters and what parts they play in the band.   Do you have a solution yet for Acyn, or have you just diagnosed the problem?

I have some solutions that I want to change during my next draft around! If you hadn’t seen it yet, Acyn has a tendency to pretend that he doesn’t actually want t…[Read more]

Ooh, Denali, those look like awesome characters. XD Evie is going to HATE Malvat, my word. 😛

wait, hold up. I’m confused…

What’s this about the story being somewhere else?

And I’m gonna give y’all a short summary of my characters:

Evelyn (goes by Evie) and Dominic are twins, and I’m thinking they’re gonna be 17 for the sake of the castle.

Evie: 5’6; long light brown hair, brown eyes rimmed with turquoise. She’s an elf; can grow…[Read more]

Okay on second thought I don’t have time to post rn so I’ll be back later…

*drops out of the ceiling into a crouch baring a knife*

I’M BACK EVERYONE!!!!!! After spending three days on the road running in and out of hotel rooms.

So anyways…

@irishcelticredflowercrown

You got Niarok soooo right!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

I’m also veeeery excited to see where this goes!

@rose-colored-fancy

That rant was EPIC!!!…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I’m so glad you had a breakthrough on Acyn! (Does this mean we get him in the castle longer? Hmmm? kidding–you take him out whenever you need to.)

It was really fun, to read through all your characters and what parts they play in the band. 🙂 Do you have a solution yet for Acyn, or have you just diagnosed the problem?

I am…[Read more]

GUYS!!! I HAD AN EPIPHANY!!!

So, I’ve been rubbing my three brain cells together about the issue of Acyn. More specifically, Acyn being annoying. (Admit it, you’ve all thought it. I have.) He’s not completely annoying, but he’s constantly straddling the line of annoyingness.

I thought it was just his personality and that’s the only thing making…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Y’know, reading that Alessio likes Bren so much, I think I’ll just swap Jericho out with someone else rather than both Bren and Jericho.  And I’ve thought of another option for who to swap in:

Jango Bastion, an Eya Greycloak (of the Falmarin tribe) that serves under Bren’s uncle Joffrey.  As one of the Greycloaks he’s an e…[Read more]

CATHY THAT WAS A BRILLIANT SUMMARY!!

@calidris

*Tackles you with a hug* CALIDRIS!!! YOU’RE BACK! (At least temporarily but I’m SO happy to see you!)

LOL, that was the most Misu post in existence XD Misu: *Explodes in blinding heavenly light, countless eyes, wings, wheels, the whole heavenly thing in all its splendid, blinding horror*

Also Misu, not three seconds later: *very f…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

YES, the Ark made me really emotional, too! I think it was the sound that got me the most–a complete surprise. (Which I have just ruined for anyone who hasn’t been there)

And thank you!! You recognized it! (I have met far too many people who don’t know of/haven’t heard of A Tale of Two Cities recently). 🙁

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Ice…[Read more]

Ow, poor thing! *bowls over with another hug*

Yeah, my mom’s unofficially diagnosed all of us for ADHD but doesn’t like the idea of medication for that so I just started studying up when I was old enough (read “when I had a character with ADHD and went through twenty different posts like ‘THIS IS NOT NORMAL!?!?!?!?!’”)

Huh, he and Alessio wou…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien That’s a really hard question =P

First and foremost, spy fiction is a genre. You should look into that.

The rest of your description doesn’t sound like historical fiction to me. HisFic needs to interact with the real world in some way. If the only possible way a reader could tell the story took place in an alternate version…[Read more]

Quin

Quin looked up from talking with Leytara. Where’s Qatar?

He looked toward the shadows by the wall where he’d seen him last, but his brother’s tall form wasn’t among them.

Quin frowned, and stopped listening to whatever the girl was saying to him.

He scanned the walls, looking. Where could he have got to? Quin shivered in the growing cold.…[Read more]

Lorcan

Lorcan felt a cold feeling creep through his chest as Niarok and Yila stared at one another in shock and fear. Quin was missing. One minute he was there and the next-

He straightened his broad shoulders, clenching his fists as his worry for the lad increased. This place was messing with them, truly.

“Everyone, get close together,” Nir…[Read more]

@rsuted-knight ooh what’s that?

Well since we are going to have snow lets make it even more interesting. There is a phenomena call Thundersnow and it would really mess with our characters. Just a little.

@anne-of-lothlorien
This is what we call “threading the eye of the needle.” I think this is a historical fiction as long as there is a trigger event were history changed.

@bella-king
OH I SAVED THAT PROFILE PIC ONCE IT HAS SUCH GREAT PERSPECTIVE!!!!
Ehem anyway…
Thanks I found my quote on Pinterest and it was delightful lol.
Oh I like this Max he sounds very intriguing (I also just like gold eyes for characters for some reason, I really liked red hair for characters to but I had this idea that I could only have o…[Read more]