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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Y’know, reading that Alessio likes Bren so much, I think I’ll just swap Jericho out with someone else rather than both Bren and Jericho. And I’ve thought of another option for who to swap in:
Jango Bastion, an Eya Greycloak (of the Falmarin tribe) that serves under Bren’s uncle Joffrey. As one of the Greycloaks he’s an extremely skilled (and powerful) archer, since the main purpose of the Greycloaks is to hunt wyverns. He’s also a proficient dancer and uses the grace and speed he’s developed from dancing to his advantage in combat. Also, because he’s of the Falmarin tribe, he has Force-sensory abilities. @joelle-stone Malvat would be able to read his mind; he’s nowhere near as powerful as Jericho, and he can’t do similar feats of healing or telekinesis.
Have a scene that he’s in (though please note he’s not always a grouch):
As Ramsey and his men went to exit the village, they were obstructed by a single hooded bowman standing before the gate. He held his longbow before him, but no arrow was yet nocked on the string. Ramsey gestured for his men to halt.
“No further,” the bowman ordered, his voice carrying a ring of authority.
“Get out of the way, boy,” Ramsey sneered. When the bowman did not, he turned to his archer. “Kill him.” The archer obeyed, firing a black-shafted arrow at the young man.
The bowman sidestepped, catching the arrow by the shaft and drawing one of his own before sending both back at the archer. The mercenary soundlessly slumped forward and slid out of the saddle as the two arrows tore into his chest.
“I said,” the bowman snarled, “no further.”Would you like Jango to join?
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