luciusbraun

Well, I discovered that I was subconsciously thinking about Anika (his girlfriend) as about 26…NOT good; he’s 19. I went into my brain and manually changed the settings, so now she’s 17-18. Hopefully that will cure it. 🙂

@wingiby-iggiby

I am not alone!

Nay, thou art not! For I feelest as thou feel when it doth come to the compooters. 😂😂😂😂

Okay, I’m tired. Canst thou tell? XD

We’re just going “there and back again.”

“Just like your uncle Bilbo!”

Me: “I cannot quote this distance, you’ll have to toss me!” (as you can tell, I’m running out of quotes XD)

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Alessio couldn’t believe Nithel had really forgotten him. After…everything. Is this just another sick joke the Castle decided to play. ‘See how crazy Alessio gets when his only friend doesn’t remember him’
Whatever, it’s not going to do anything good to get angry or…Just stop, calm down. Thus says the Lord who created you…Star Breather,…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Aww, thank you SO much, that really means a lot!! He has a lot of inner turmoil, I enjoy writing it XD

Your welcome! 😀

He’s one of those characters who has rather a tendency to have very raw, quotable lines. (Fun fact, his ex-girlfriend has that same tendency, though more abstract. She practically speaks in metaphors onl…

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CHET GABE

Chet felt dozens of eyes drilling a dozen holes into his body, and he felt like they were drawing all of his darkest secrets to themselves.

What’re they thinkin’? Whadda they think I am? Whadda they think I’ve done? Do I look suspicious? 

“Hello,” a voice said warily. “Where do you come from?”

Chet started and then narrowed his eyes…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Btw, I LOVE how you show Aydin’s inner turmoil!!! Your prose is so good! One of the things I struggle with is showing a character’s inner monologue, and I think you aced it!

Aww, thank you SO much, that really means a lot!! He has a lot of inner turmoil, I enjoy writing it XD

He’s one of those characters who has rather a tende…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

ALL THE PUPPY PICTURES!!! If you get it figured out 🙂

Puppies rule!!!

Yaknow, natural reaction.

Exactly 😉

Btw, I LOVE how you show Aydin’s inner turmoil!!! Your prose is so good! One of the things I struggle with is showing a character’s inner monologue, and I think you aced it!

Quin

Quin leaned awkwardly on his lone crutch.

Great. now it looks like I’m a helpless invalid to every one in this cave.

But everyone had the politeness to look away, and pretend they didn’t notice. Even though they did. Everyone but Basil. He sat staring at Quin’s empty pantleg. It’s not contagious if that’s what you’re thinking. His cheeks…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf,

Ooh, quotes… I really like these:

“Courage is found in unlikely places.” -Gildor Inglorion

“Deeds will be no less valiant because they are unpraised.” -Aragorn

“There’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.” -Samwise Gamgee

Plus Sam’s whole spiel about stories, but that’s quite the speech so I…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf That is an extremely cool name! I do make up names for mine, but mine are hardly that good. I think maybe my best is Alerion (Uhl-Ear-E-uhn)

which bring me to my next question. Anybody have suggestions for a name for a evil warlord whose sword is forged from the blood of his enemies?

@wingiby-iggiby

XD XD XD yes, Bobby would love that! I might be able to upload a photo of him, but I’m bad with computers, so I might not XD

ALL THE PUPPY PICTURES!!! If you get it figured out 🙂

Oh, oops! Lol, forget I ever mentioned them! XD Thanks!

LOL, don’t worry about it XD I wasn’t being clear.

he still would’ve bent down and felt the sno…

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@joelle-stone

YES, SAM!! he’s an amazing character. Do you have a favorite quote and/or moment/event in LotR? If I had to choose it might be the battle of the Pelennor Fields, but I can’t choose!!

@crazywriter, no I haven’t seen the movies. I don’t really want to, either. You like them though?

Also, I am so proud of this name I just…[Read more]

I was thinking that a/an would be represented by simply the letter A(original, yes I know XD) with the difference being a simple ‘a’ for a, and ‘á’ for an.
‘The’ would be Ech, pronounced throatily, like Ecchh in the back of your throat

No I’m happy to help!

Have you thought about articles (a, an, and the)? Do you want to include those in your language or do you want to keep them as is?

All of the above, but maybe the focus should be on the system since I have no shortage of good words.

again, thanks for helping me, I know I’m not the easiest person to work with, I hardly explain anything well, and am a little scattered

What would help you out the most that I could do? Invent words? Try and come up with good structure?

I’m willing to help out with anything 🙂

@denali-christianson

The magnitude with which I felt that statement is much too great to express in simple black and white type. XD

I am not alone! 😀

And I’m sitting there looking at the keyboard thinking “the words go ever on and on…”

We’re just going “there and back again.”

And I’m looking at you like, “cracked, she is!” XD

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@wingiby-iggiby

XD XD XD yes, Bobby would love that! I might be able to upload a photo of him, but I’m bad with computers, so I might not XD

The magnitude with which I felt that statement is much too great to express in simple black and white type. XD

Yes! I’m like: “I wish it need not have happened in my time.”

And I’m sitting there looking…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Oh, oops! Lol, forget I ever mentioned them! XD Thanks!

@wingiby-iggiby

Also just wanted to let you know that the two figures in front of the door are kind of, um… *clears throat* hallucinations of Ayden’s…