ClaireElyse

@beth20

Thanks!

@melodyjoy

Haha yeah, life! lol, I like the premise for your book!

@devastate-lasting

Your characters are so cool! I love Shade Seneca!

@arindown

This is a really cool idea! I’ll try to put a character up soon. 🙂

@vic

Cool and cooler! Keep up the good work! I really love Diane!! She’s so sweet!

@devastate-lasting

🙂 Thanks so much!

Yeah, I love guinea pigs! I used to have 2 of them (not anymore, sad…)

MEL

@melodyjoy Ahaha thanks! (There’s so much backstory to cover it’s really hard to give a complete description of all the characters)

Ahh your story sounds really meaningful! I would love to read it! Also you profile picture is super cute.

OK, so here is the basic “gist” of my story 🙂 :

Chloe Loran worked at a daycare till a horrific car accident seriously injured her. Struggling with depression, guilt, and many serious physical issues, she must turn to God for help with her relationships and her physical and emotional needs. 

I’ll try to post some of the story asap 🙂

Thanks!

MELODY

@eden-anderson

Hey! Thanks for starting this topic! Super awesome! 🙂 (And it really got me thinking)

Your story sounds so intriguing. And sad. I can definitely tell that it’s going to be very well written :).

@wolverinerm

It eats my posts like ALL the time so I have gotten into the habit of copying what I have written so that just in case it…[Read more]

@vic

AND I just read your 3rd portion! **Thumbs up**

I liked how you portray Diane’s character and personality. You do a great job of showing how she is really shy and quiet/reserved 🙂

Is this going to be a long book-type story, or is it going to be a short story? Just wondering’ (cause I love your work so far! 🙂

MEL

@arindown

Yeah, good idea!

Well, I’ll share Marrill bc she is basically me lol!

She’s 13, has shoulder-length hair (it’s red, which mine isn’t lol!) She’s an only child…okay so a few things that aren’t like me haha! She loves animals and owns tons of them.

And here’s a snippet from her…

Marrill bounced along the dusty road in the back of…[Read more]

@vic

Hello! I really enjoyed reading the second portion of your story!!! Great job!

One thing I enjoy when reading your story is that even though you are writing in 3rd person, I almost feel like it is written in 1st because you help readers picture her and know what she is thinking and going through.

MEL

@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h@anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior

Let me know what you think. Still don’t know exactly how this is gonna end. 😏 Next scene is under construction and will be up soonish. Maybe by tomorrow but I’m working so it might be Monday.

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Her doorbell rang and Liz jumped. Calm down! she scolded h…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 I have no knowledge about beekeeping, lol! Notice I don’t explain anything about what she needs to do… 😆 I just wanted to include details about her “normal” life. Though, I have no idea if she could actually do legit beekeeping with a travel itinerary… do you have to take care of them every day, or can you kinda leave them t…[Read more]

@arindown I guess I’ll share a bit about my three main characters…

Micah Radcliffe: An analytical, ambitious businessman. Blonde hair, blue eyes, tinted glasses. President of the Roses. Constantly in a power struggle with the other gang leaders of Heather Flights. Micah’s very confident in his own abilities and the power that he holds, which…[Read more]

@emma-starr

Yes! Someone else who doesn’t think action is a necessary for a heartfull story (what’s heartfull anyway?😆 I think I just made it up).

I have that discussion all the time with my brother. When I watched LOTR I loved Frodo’s story, and my very favorite part of the whole movie was when Boromir died.😭 But, my brother was convinced tha…[Read more]

@eden-anderson @wolverinerm @beth20 @chalice @devastate-lasting @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @emma-starr

Sooo…now that we’ve all got to hear a little about each-other’s stories, I was wondering if everyone would like to share some of their characters?😊

Tell us what they look like, why you like them, personality, strength/weaknesses, and mayb…[Read more]

@eden-anderson Oh my goodness yess! Let me know if you ever need a //snippet reader// :)))

I play piano and sing as my main instruments. I just started ukulele, but that’s more of a for-fun side thing. 🙂 Do you play any instruments??

THANK YOU. *happy crying* That means a lot to me!! I’m a poet trying to write a story and that’s just very…[Read more]

@vic

You have a wonderful way of expressing things with your words. I really enjoyed reading the new portion! Great job! I especially liked the part about detracting attention by attracting it in a totally different way. Super cool. 👍:D