Taylor Clogston

Is it vision writers international?

@joelle-stone

that’s sounds awesome! I’ll have to check it out!

@crazywriter,

Hehe, no problem!! If you want a more consistent group of critics, you should check out Writer’s Vision – it’s free, run by peeps I know, and is just a group of young writers helping each other out. 🙂

It’s not letting me post what I want to … *furrows brow*

@joelle-stone

thanks so much. This a really helpful, especially the format. I really appreciate the time you take to help me. I know you’re busy so I really am grateful.

@crazywriter,

The war council was nothing as exciting or nerve-wracking as Abner had expected. Mostly, it was bureaucrats arguing about the levying of taxes, the raising of militia, none of which concerned Abner. Hm, you might want to draw this out a bit. With all the sweating beforehand, you had the perfect set-up for a healthy dose of…[Read more]

@mamaauthoress I can see you!

Uhm … something keeps blocking me when I try to post … maybe if this gets through, I’ll try to write a response.

The user name is my pen name.

I have no idea what the plan is since I just got here, but I’m fine to do anything really.

@crazywriter,

TWO SNOW DAYS?!?! Lucky. XD Most days the high over here has been in the 30 degree range, with no snow and freezing winds. #desertwinter XD

@joelle-stone

Oh no worries. I just wanted to check up on ya. Yeah I get being busy. Lately I’ve had two snow days so I had a four day weekend so I was kinda bored

@crazywriter,

Nope, not dead, but still busy. XD I’m thinking I’m going to have to split up edits for your chapter again… *growls at Life*

@calidris  no wonder Quin has a complex, lol. He’s tiny next to all those giants! Thanks for doing this, it’s really helpful

@rose-colored-fancy

haha.  Oh dear, yeah. XD Now Qatar has some serious bragging rights. Anytime anybody else lords something over him in this castle he can be like. “Yeah, but I died…”

@calidris

Oh gosh my characters look so smol XD They’re not really but everyone is so ridiculously tall XD LOL imagine how 5-foot-nothing Faye would look there XD She’d get squished XD

Also, rose-colored-fancy discovered something very interesting about Basil that could be important for his interactions with Ruan!  Apparently Basil has autism.  I…

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ALSO @rose-colored-fancy @inkhorn @rusted-knight @emily-waldorf @mamaauthoress @anyoneelse

Look at Klein, Ruan and Basil just  t o w e r i n g  above everyone else 😂

@mamaauthoress ooh nice!  He looks a lot softer and sweeter than i first imagined him!  But he still looks very unapproachable (in the best way possible)

Is the girl his betrothed?

Also, @rose-colored-fancy discovered something very interesting about Basil that could be important for his interactions with Ruan!  Apparently Basil has autism.  I s…[Read more]

Nithel’s first look instantly told him his friend did not want to be called on, almost as much as Alessio had not wanted to socially interact with anyone when he first arrived. He still wasn’t really comfortable with it… Alessio promptly filed that away feeling really bad for making his friend uncomfortable.

After a time, Nithel did speak, thoug…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I guess Khalon hasn’t really been in any life threatening situations at least probably not like the ones Aydin has been in.

KHALON

“I seem to have the gift of making enemies, otherwise no,” Aydin responded in a dry voice.

Okay, so clearly that was the wrong thing to ask. Maybe I should stop asking questions about him. Most…[Read more]

@inkhorn

I could not figure out Aydin. One second he was preventing a fight, the next he seemed ready for one, and then he was disbelieving on the point if condescending, and now he was sympathetic and either crazy or traumatized as his listening to a noise that didn’t exist proved.

He’s absolutely correct, honestly. XD Aydin is such a social c…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

I found Qatar during that one scene XD