Story_Guardian

@denali-christianson

that was awesome. =) I like your characters.  I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p

Abirami

So bored.

I was lying on my back again, waiting for Ku to wake up. A while ago, Enydd had woken up and walked around a bit, asked me what next, but she had gone off somewhere…[Read more]

@kimlikesart

Sorry, I didn’t see your post. I only got on late last night and didn’t refresh the page. I apologize for any trouble I may have caused. Do not accept my last post as an event that occurred in Character Castle 2.5. Continue with what you have written. I’ll try to see if I can get Sherlock to bump into Nithel, but you will be in…[Read more]

@everyone

HIIIIII I’ll respond to y’all like tomorrow when I actually have time. XD

For now, Niarok is insisting that I get him back to dad status. So here goes…

Niarok

This felt strangely familiar.

Painfully familiar.

The smell of smoke was almost enough to send him into a flashback.

Too bad he’d picked up Yila’s habit of p…[Read more]

Sherlock witness everything, as he chased after Arsene. Most of all, he saw how Baron had tried to kill his brother. Drawing his handgun, Sherlock activated the targeting beam.
“Jacob Baron, get down on the floor this very instant!”
Baron tried to run, cackling madly. However, as he walked, a man, who was standing in the same path, tripped Bar…[Read more]

Thank you! <3

aw, thank you,

@skylarynn

this came from my work in progress. I actually just finished writing it yesterday (yay!!!) but it still needs some ironing out… but I will be asking for beta readers here soon. =) Oh, it would be wonderful if I could get it published though!

The world swirled. Nithel’s stomach flipped and he appeared in another room. Giant. With bright walls, almost appearing to be made of ivory or alabaster. The floor was smooth, with golden designs twirling through it, as if they had been melted into the floor. He blinked rapidly at the sudden light, and the despairing fog did not leave his mind. Was…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Hey Jared, it’s up to you, but if I was writing it, I would make the little boy’s speech more clear. Especially stuff like ‘wahnts yau.’ That’s just too unreadable. I’ve found that a better way of showing speech impediments is by using improper grammar, badly worded sentences, and made up contractions.

OKAY EVERYBODY! @ragnarok @hannahrenner @this-is-not-an-alien *claps hands*
Not to toot the same old horn, but we need to lay some ground rules for the character castle to keep the craziness down, and to help everyone understand what’s happening.

These are the original rules, slightly modified~

Welcome to the Character Castle! This is where you…

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I also don’t think I’m understanding what you’re saying exactly, so who knows, I might actually agree

I understand what you’re saying now. We actually believe quite differently on that subject.

Anyways, keep up the good writing!

@everyone I’m doing an online cleanse (of sorts),  so I don’t know if I’ll be able to keep up. Feel free to use Isella, and I’ll try to write some, but I have an inkling that I’ll be short on time from now on, so if it gets too problematic you can kick her out, or I’ll remove her. Keep being awesome!

@noah-cochran

I also don’t think I’m understanding what you’re saying exactly, so who knows, I might actually agree XD

We can discuss Legos if you want, I understand that a little more than theology 😂

If we agree to disagree that’s fine

Yep. 🙂

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😂 You’re good!

I always thought I was saved, but when I went into a hard depression I eventually realized I wasn’t, and it scared me. I always in a way knew I wasn’t because I was always scared of dying and I always doubted, but I would just tell myself I was paranoid.

Similar thing happens to her,…[Read more]

@erynne

So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, but she isn’t actually saved. Does that sound better, Professor?

What I was referencing was the possible theological/biblical inaccuracy of the statement. I assume you’re now saying that she thought that accepting Jesus saved her (Armenian belief) but that that was fal…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

That’s sounds pretty good

Ah good, I got Professor Cochran’s approval.

I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂

Basically she thinks she’s saved because at one point she prayed a prayer and accepted Jesus into her heart 😉

So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, b…[Read more]

@erynne

However, it is shown as a flaw.

That’s sounds pretty good.

Truth be told, she is not actually saved for about half the book, she’s just able to fool people, including herself.

I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂

I did stay up incredibly late last night and wrote 3,000 words.

Great job! Keep that up!

@jared-williams

That was fantastic, where is your book and when can I buy it?

@jared-williams

Please let me know if it is hard to understand him and whether or not his intonation make sense or if anything contradicts my description of him…

I found it easy to read Hadwin’s dialogue; honestly it was fun because I don’t usually get to read phonetic speech.  I don’t think you contradicted yourself, and the scene was pretty en…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

‘proud to be single.’ I know this is a common thing people claim to be both in real life after a break up and in books, but in my opinion it is not at all a good thing.

Yep, I totally agree. It’s not a biblical perspective of things at all and a self-empowerment way to go.

However, it is shown as a flaw. Truth be told, she is not…[Read more]