Story_Guardian

She nodded, “One more on our side is always helpful.”

“We don’t know who he is or where he came from. He’s been destroying different kingdoms and killing people. We were having a party at the castle- Ellie’s a princess you know- when he just came in with a bunch of his… soldiers, I guess, they were all dressed in black, kind of shadowy looking.…[Read more]

Pia nodded. “My brother is on our side yes.” She glanced at Eliana. “I think he’d like you…”

K’Nika shook her head. “I do not.”

(hey sorry, my internet was all “nope” for a few days)

Everyone started going forward but continued talking. “Weinik? Is he on our side then?”

“soo… K’Nika, do you know anything about this wizard dude?” Julian asked scratching the back of his head

Okayyy, so SE is being funky.

I shall try to answer succinctly in case that is the problem.

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you so much!! AND THE MEME IS JUST SO- 😂

@calidris

Thank you! He’s not all lines and edges, but he’s not a teddybear — I’m glad it got through like that. (:

Yes, that is Yulenna! The scene is their very first meeting. 😆

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Um, no I don’t think so. Here’s a link: https://sistersthree3.wixsite.com/writers-vision It’s a pretty small site, but worth the time. 🙂

Is it vision writers international?

@joelle-stone

that’s sounds awesome! I’ll have to check it out!

@crazywriter,

Hehe, no problem!! If you want a more consistent group of critics, you should check out Writer’s Vision – it’s free, run by peeps I know, and is just a group of young writers helping each other out. 🙂

It’s not letting me post what I want to … *furrows brow*

@joelle-stone

thanks so much. This a really helpful, especially the format. I really appreciate the time you take to help me. I know you’re busy so I really am grateful.

@crazywriter,

The war council was nothing as exciting or nerve-wracking as Abner had expected. Mostly, it was bureaucrats arguing about the levying of taxes, the raising of militia, none of which concerned Abner. Hm, you might want to draw this out a bit. With all the sweating beforehand, you had the perfect set-up for a healthy dose of…[Read more]

@mamaauthoress I can see you!

Uhm … something keeps blocking me when I try to post … maybe if this gets through, I’ll try to write a response.

The user name is my pen name.

I have no idea what the plan is since I just got here, but I’m fine to do anything really.

@crazywriter,

TWO SNOW DAYS?!?! Lucky. XD Most days the high over here has been in the 30 degree range, with no snow and freezing winds. #desertwinter XD

@joelle-stone

Oh no worries. I just wanted to check up on ya. Yeah I get being busy. Lately I’ve had two snow days so I had a four day weekend so I was kinda bored

@crazywriter,

Nope, not dead, but still busy. XD I’m thinking I’m going to have to split up edits for your chapter again… *growls at Life*

@calidris  no wonder Quin has a complex, lol. He’s tiny next to all those giants! Thanks for doing this, it’s really helpful

@rose-colored-fancy

haha.  Oh dear, yeah. XD Now Qatar has some serious bragging rights. Anytime anybody else lords something over him in this castle he can be like. “Yeah, but I died…”

@calidris

Oh gosh my characters look so smol XD They’re not really but everyone is so ridiculously tall XD LOL imagine how 5-foot-nothing Faye would look there XD She’d get squished XD

Also, rose-colored-fancy discovered something very interesting about Basil that could be important for his interactions with Ruan!  Apparently Basil has autism.  I…

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ALSO @rose-colored-fancy @inkhorn @rusted-knight @emily-waldorf @mamaauthoress @anyoneelse

Look at Klein, Ruan and Basil just  t o w e r i n g  above everyone else 😂