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OBrian of the Surface World replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
My current work in progress (WIP), still not used to the shorthand acronyms, is a quest novel which tends to lend itself to missteps, re-routes and changing directions. It goes off the grid and off the rails in many cases, but I have found that sometimes that is the very place I need to be to find what I am looking…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 26 : Compare and Contrast in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
Again, this is a recap lesson to help you keep on improving your skills in Pacing and Suspense!
The goal today is to write a really slow, suspenseless snippet, then one that is full of suspense. BONUS POINTS if they are the same scene. Not that there are points, but that will help give you the right idea.
As always, keep it fairly short. I’m…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Lesson 20 : Pacing to the Paragraph in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen *replies late* Ooooh, nice!
Ah yes. The emblems stay. They were all made by someone else to keep them kinda uniform. *nodnod*
Really well done! I love the sound of it a lot. You should read the Song Keeper Chronicles by Gillian Bronte-Adams. (I feel like I’ve told you this…)
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CalebOnline started the topic The Mysterious Man in the forum Characters 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys, it’s Caleb!
So I have this character in a video series that I want to develop, and I wanted to see if you could help me.
His name is Bobby Jones, and he is supposed to be a mix between Indiana Jones and an adventure hero stereotype… the thing is, no one meets him. Although the plot of my story revolves around finding him, he’s…[Read more]
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Great job, @steward-of-the-pen @j-a-penrose @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @sarah-vdh !
My total (counting my Creative Writing and my NaNoWriMo novel) is… 53,105! I honestly didn’t think I would make it; this my first year ever finishing NaNoWriMo. :3
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Greetings, fellow Parimi Alcaians!! (<– please correct me if I’m addressing our guild incorrectly)
I’m one of the newbies here. 🙂 And since I’ve already introduced myself in a bio thread, I’ll link it here for any of those who may be interested: https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/a-n-intj-history-buff-narnian-team-cap-me/
Something I…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay guys! GOOD JOB EVERYONE!
Please hand your TOTAL WORD COUNTS IN.
I managed 81073 all up.
You guys all did SO well and I am SO proud of you!
@cassie-hartfinh
@esjohnson
@coggleton
@julia
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly
@evelyn
@ariella-newheart
@sarah-vdh
@steward-of-the-pen
@e-jo3
@writercatherine
@thewanderingtypewriter
@jade
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
PARIMI ALCA. IT IS TIME TO INTRODUCE NEW GUILDLINGS!
@calebonline
@write-owl
@obrian-of-the-surface-world
@pursuewisdom
@azeline-d
@anneWelcome you guys to Parimi Alca and I really hope you find it absolutely stellar! I’m sure we’re all desperate to meet you and get to know you, so introduce yourselves! Go mad!
Guys, make our newest…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn @j-a-penrose @ariella-newheart @steward-of-the-pen @julia @writercatherine
*cries* *sobs* *cries some more*
I couldn’t do it, guys.
*sniffles*
I tried, I really did. I got to 30k, and then I got so busy and sick over the month I couldn’t do much more. I’m sorry!!
My final count is 37,500, from all of the writing I did both by hand and…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
*races in on pet griffin* *lands and loses balance* *picks self up, brushes dust off*
Ahem.
Sorry I’m so late everybody, but I heard we were having an official Parimi Alca Housewarming Party?? HELLO, @pursuewisdom!!! What do you think of our humble abode so far? *leans on stray pipe* I hope steampunk is your thing, cuz that’s what some of our…[Read more]
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
HII! Thank you for the warm welcome! I love being here finally. I’ve been talking to @evelyn and @write-owl so far in the general forums, but being in a guild feels so close-knit, which is fantastic.
I’m into speculative. I’ve started several WIPs but haven’t finished any of them. 😛 The first is high fantasy; second was a…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Lesson 25 : Piece of Suspense in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Wow! I thought that was really good! Great job!
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 25 : Piece of Suspense in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
Hello All!
There has been a lot of really good things going on for this guild lately, and even more changes are coming. Us guildmasters are all plotting away at making things improve.
Today signifies the beginning of summing up our theme on Pacing and Suspense. Over the next few weeks, I’ll be posting general Activities to sum up…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 25 : Piece of Suspense in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
Hello All!
There has been a lot of really good things going on for this guild lately, and even more changes are coming. Us guildmasters are all plotting away at making things improve.
Today signifies the beginning of summing up our theme on Pacing and Suspense. Over the next few weeks, I’ll be posting general Activities to sum up…[Read more]
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Love the character so much 😂 He sounds like me to my siblings sometimes, haha
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
*explosive sigh of relief while collapsing* Well, it was a small and hard-won battle with all the Thanksgiving craziness going on, guys, but I finally got to 33,000 words!! Hopefully will make it to 50,000 by month’s end!!
Favorite Snippet: Drent struggled to hold Rona down. He looked at Vorok, his eyebrow cocked in uncertainty. “I wasn’t awar…[Read more]
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen A writer character?! That’s so awesome! I’ve also always wanted to write one 😛
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 24 : Countdown in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
She had three days to save her family from being killed by the assassins.
Three days to stop their country from losing their only defence.
Three days to live up to her destiny
Three days to survive.
Three days.
Countdowns, as a general rule, often add suspense into a story very nicely. Provided that you have it relate well to the plot,…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yes, Vorok couldn’t last, I’m sorry. But I’ll tell you a secret: there is always a light at the end of the tunnel, though the darkness is deep and the tunnel is long. Vorok is the one navigating the tunnel.
@steward-of-the-pen Yes, I do admit I can be a very evil author…but all of my actions are for a purpose. Have you read…[Read more]
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Emily D posted a new activity comment 7 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @steward-of-the-pen @writercatherine @ariella-newheart Aww, you girls are so sweet! Thanks for all your beautiful words! Yes, I have a website (yay!) which I am still building and have put like almost zero words of content on it yet. the address is thefierypen.atwebpages.com but it could change. I will try to let…[Read more]
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