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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Nithel had tensed the smallest bit when Jericho touched Alessio. Then he felt relief as Alessio didn’t pull away.
She was being kind to him. Nithel smiled a bit, sadness touching underneath it.
But the way Alessio stared at his hand when Jericho released… Nithel blinked several times and swallowed hard, smile evaporating. Nithel ached so much…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
FINALS! ARE! OVER!
Smeagol is free!
(Until next semester.)
Yay!! Congratulations on surviving! XD
Chantara
Everyone was clustering into groups. A man strode up to the cat-like creature and the lizard-like creature climbed onto his shoulders. I saw his mouth twitch down, his eyebrows furrow. I narrowed my eyes. We all had our…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@skylarynn
I officially love Karayan! His whole attitude to this entire Castle is so funnyAlessio would love him.“Darling, there is no need for such actions. I’d never lay a hand on you, you’re being unreasonable.”
Connel halted at the familiar growl from a corner in the room. He turned, grasping the hilt of his sword as the feline vampire…[Read more] -
Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Alessio blinked, staring up at Nithel.
Nithel’s chest ached for him, and he held the youth’s eyes as he thought. Take your time my friend.
It’s alright, Nithel was about to think, you don’t have to. When Alessio spoke.
“I…don’t know how to,”
Nithel’s chest dropped, filling with sorrow and concern. You don’t know how to. Nithel’s eyes lowered…[Read more]
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Rose started the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
So, this is something I really struggle with and am trying to improve on, so I decided that (like most things) it can be turned into a fun and hopefully helpful game. Here’s how it works:
Post a short description of any of your characters, and critique someone who posted earlier.
Now, just to be clear, this isn’t about what the characters…[Read more]
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Rebekah12 replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Sorry for the delay guys!! Ran into unforseen complications. Prepare for a LONG chapter. *reads stuff*
😮😮 It is not an easy thing to make a cliffhanger that actually gets to me. Good job.
Wow. Okay. Don’t root for wyverns. Got…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Chantara
Before Grimme could reply, a flapping, squawking, ball of feathers hurtled through the room, plunging through the cake and startling Meira. Pandemonium ensued. I watched with amusement, without contributing to the chaos.
An unfamiliar man had joined the table, I gave him a quick, keen look, then pretended I hadn’t noticed him. He didn’t…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@joelle-stone @skylarynn @this-is-not-an-alien
*stumbles in*
Nithel’s got a crush. Oh dear dear dear dear dear…
He doesn’t even know what that word means, and the feeling isn’t even completely formed but- *stops, and blinks a few times* He does. He… is having weird feelings for Jericho. His first time… oy… *babies grow up fast* *…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Alessio moved closer to Nithel, and his heart warmed, eyes gaining some peace. Happiness.
Then the youth spoke, in just a whisper. His eyes were careful, testing as they stared at him. “If you treat yourself like you’re worth nothing you’ll attract people who believe it.”
Nithel looked down, heart swirling. Was he believing that for himself…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Malvat curled his bulk around the cavern, wishing it would enlarge like the tunnel had. Despite his power-enforced hide, the spikes lining the walls, floor, and ceiling made it uncomfortable. He should just grind them into dust, or break them all off and toss them into the fiery inferno beyond the tunnel, but he decided those actions might invoke…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“If you wish to hear my story, I’m afraid I’ll disappoint.” Brendin said quietly. Alessio dropped his gaze, trying very hard not to look disappointed.
“How so?” Jericho asked
“I know only fragments of it.” he replied uneasily “I remember little.”
Was it because of magic? Alessio’s memories had been selectively buried until he hadn’t even known he…[Read more] -
Crazywriter replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
anybody here?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I’m just gonna repost your story with my edits in brackets and commentary in italics. 🙂
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Staring at the fallen beast[,] Nadia realized with horror that one of the defenders had been caught between the heavy corpse and the…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Yep, and I’m planning to critique you as soon as I get some time to look it over thoroughly. Right now I’m trying to juggle the first day of school after a week-long vacation that I didn’t get much sleep on, so my brain isn’t up to that just yet. I’ll probably critique it either this afternoon or possibly tomorrow morning. *crosses…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Hrm. IDK for sure, haha. He’ll probably be slightly bored with it, but he’s sharp enough to notice Kivadh’s gender-hiding (unlike me, haha), so that’ll probably peak his interest at least slightly. He’ll definitely be interested in her healing powers, and will consider her empowered, which makes her either a #1 enemy or a target for…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Ahhhh, clever!!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Okay, so not Yoda. *goes and reads story* *realizes that Jericho suspiciously never mentions Kivadh’s gender* *wonders how Jericho can be Kivadh since Kivadh died* *is immensly intersested in your story*
Alright, I’m guessing Jericho is Obi-Wan/Kivadh/Kuvadhuh. Am I right?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Aha, that’s what I thought, but I wasn’t sure if she had done the whole name-change/hide thing Nithel did.
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
*laughs* With who? Obi-Wan, Luke, or Yoda?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
*tries to think of all the female characters in the original trilogy* *wonders if this person even is female* C3PO? I’m just kidding. Yep, I think I need that hint.
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