Sir Leeds

@rose-colored-fancy

Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice. 😉 School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.

How about you?

Four of my other beta readers have given me feedback, and the other four may or may not finish within the next few…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Hey Noah! How are you doing? How are your beta-readers progressing? Do you have most of your feedback in? How is the new series coming along, are your characters cooperating? XD

(Those were a lot of questions… XD)

Hi…!

So poems are very new to me. I have this poem that isn’t sitting right with me word wise. It doesn’t sound like a poem to me. Now I know nothing about poems, so any advice you could give would be oh so helpful.

Thank you for your time.

The Scar

A lush forest is blemished by this coulee

A imprudent child is at the bottom of it

That…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Ah, yes, guilty as charged. I used to love my stick-men battles way back in the day.

Oh, absolutely. Mine were of the rectangle horse varietyXD

Oooh, it’s Sci-fi. I like it.

@rose-colored-fancy

All little kids draw themselves doing cool things, and in his case that was being a mighty warrior

Ah, yes, guilty as charged. I used to love my stick-men battles way back in the day.

@noah-cochran

Nice. Seeing first hand sources of writing and archaeology is always fascinating.

Exactly! This was originally written on birch bark, not parchment, so it’s amazing it was preserved that well.

Elucidation required.

All little kids draw themselves doing cool things, and in his case that was being a mighty warrior XD

@rose-colored-fancy

It’s one of the many doodles made by a seven-year-old boy named Onfim who lived in Novgorod (now Russia) around 700 years ago.

Nice. Seeing first hand sources of writing and archaeology is always fascinating.

As you do.

Elucidation required.  😂

@noah-cochran

Happy Holidays, I hope you had a great Christmas 🙂

I’m getting a zillion character ideas just thinking about it.

Absolutely! I think one of the interesting things about it is that family dynamics function completely differently from most others and that even in the same circumstances, it could work completely differently. Endless p…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Sibling dynamics are my absolute favorite thing to write, and parent-child dynamics are up there too. That’s actually what most of my first book is centered around and it was really fun to write!

I’m getting a zillion character ideas just thinking about it.

It’s an official Croatian letter that was written in 1445.

I love tha…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

I really like the family dynamic of a son or daughter working with their parents, especially in a medieval/fantasy setting.

Exactly! It’s a bit harder work to justify everything but it’s so worth it! I love writing family dynamics in general, and I think all of my main characters have some family.

Sibling dynamics are my absolute…[Read more]

Hello again, Cainon @sir-leeds and Daeus @daeus-lamb

Here is a horrific idea that I had.  It is only a few lines from the perspective of a Hive-controlled villain.

“You were not born. You were downloaded. You are nothing but fractalated bits of carbon and a series of charges. A code of randomization, that requires debugging. You have no fa…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I can really see why so many people choose to make their main characters orphans just to get the parents out of the way of adventuring things XD It makes sense from a plot perspective, even though it isn’t any fun for the character.

I agree. However, though I write mostly adult characters (19-20+ in age), who are out of the h…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Oh wow, nice. That’s a lot more than I do, all I have when I go into a chapter is several bullet points under that chapter.

I used to do that too, but I found that even though it takes a bit longer, it makes it much easier to write since I’m very prone to get lost in the middle of a conversation like “Where was I going with this? I k…[Read more]

That same cat had a habit of jumping on people’s backs while they were bending over. That happened multiple times, but the crowning glory was the time my mom was painting something on a step-ladder and bent down to get something and that extremely large cat decided jumping onto her back was the best possible way to demand attention. Nothing went w…

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@rose-colored-fancy

And then before I write it I write an outline for the chapter with as much detail as I think of and a rough idea of the dialogue.

Oh wow, nice. That’s a lot more than I do, all I have when I go into a chapter is several bullet points under that chapter.

On that note, thinking of external justifications for why characters are…

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@noah-cochran

Do you use chapter by chapter outlines or list of chronological events outlines?

Both! I start with the fifteen beats, then I fill in anything I can think of to get from one to the other and then split that up into chapters. And then before I write it I write an outline for the chapter with as much detail as I think of and a rough…[Read more]