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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 5: Emotions in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
Welcome to our lovely frosty (or maybe sweltering, depending on where you are) first lesson of July! We’re going to be focusing on emotions in storytelling today. What do emotions have to do with pacing and suspense? Glad you asked.
It’s all very well to write a scene that has an insane amount of tension in the action. After all, he only just…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hmmm, indeeeeeeeed. The main thing is that I don’t know anyone, and I don’t think I can invite anyone into a cabin now… too late in the session.
If we can get 5 people interested, I’ll make a cabin. (If possible.) I will be in two cabins, but hey! That’s fiiiiine.
@wishingwell13 @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @julia @ev…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 4 : The Object in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
WOOT! You made it alllll the way to our 4th lesson! *hands out lembas* Good job. Now we’ll be looking at our beautiful little vectors. Those points that your readers have their attention drawn to. That thing that keeps being mentioned. It doesn’t have to be huge, but the mystery around it does. You need to keep feeling yourself get drawn into it.…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay all ye Parimis, it’s about time we found out why you signed up for a guild.
Here is where we can discuss our WIPs (Works in Progress) and get help and ideas from one another. So essentially, a thread full of flailing brainstorming! *cheers* I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone’s working on!!!
I’ll start us off with a quick…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello Parimis!
I don’t know how many of you are participating in Camp NaNo this year, but I’m making this thread so that if you want extra motivation or need quick help with something it’s just here.
Camp NaNo, for anyone who doesn’t know, is a virtual online writing camp that happens in April and July internationally. You can set yourself a…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion @wishingwell @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @cassie-hartfinh
Okay guys, the results for our first guild war are back! *cheers* We didn’t win, but I loved your…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Okay guys, I’ve handed our submission in. *nodnod* So, now we just have to wait. Good job everyone, and if you didn’t get a chance to participate, don’t worry! Just…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Okay guys! At some point over the next few days, we will be welcoming FIVE NEW PARIMIS! *cheers* Just wanted to let you know so that you could keep your eyes peeled…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 3 : Dialogue in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Here’s the next update on using information to create effective pacing and suspense. If you missed last lesson, it doesn’t matter too much but you can look at it here. Most times, you will write a scene and there will be dialogue. The temptation with have an antagonist vs protagonist scene is to have them both scream at each other their plans. The…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 3 : Dialogue in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Here’s the next update on using information to create effective pacing and suspense. If you missed last lesson, it doesn’t matter too much but you can look at it here. Most times, you will write a scene and there will be dialogue. The temptation with have an antagonist vs protagonist scene is to have them both scream at each other their plans. The…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampioin
Okay all, this is your last chance to add to the doc/edit it. By Sunday in Australia, (a bit over a day away) I’ll be finalising things and trying to work out how on…[Read more]
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Joseph Kolapudi replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hi @silverclaw-bonnetfolly – hope all is well writing-wise? 🙂
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Indeed! There is a first draft, and now it must be added to, changed, and edited! I’ll go through and leave some suggestions so that you all get the idea, then go…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 2 : Choice of Information in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Time for our second lesson in Pacing and Suspense, and hopefully it will be a major help. Until the end of June, we’ll be working through choice of information.
One of the things that will keep a reader riveted to a book is if they don’t know everything. If you know exactly what’s going on and what will happen, you’ll get bored. I can guarant…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Please keep my six-year-old cousin in your prayers… in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart Thank you for your prayers! Surgery seemed to go smoothly and he is now recovering!
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Jane Maree started the topic Prayers for your Guildmaster in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
As you might have seen, your guildmaster is currently MIA. As her irl cousin, I’m here as acting guildmaster for you folks in her place, and I’ll also keep you updated so you can be praying.
Basically: she has appendicitis (probably) and has spent the night in hospital. Last I heard, she had surgery scheduled for today in which she may or may not…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
YAY!!
I love writing death scenes. *evil writer’s laugh*
*excitedly scans everyone’s fantastic ideas*
The letter concept is interesting, but I think deaths in person are more heart wrenching (at least for me). I really like the ideas @ariella-newheart came up with, especially the third. Ouch! 😮
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly – Wifi dying? THAT’S…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Yes, that is what I was thinking.
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Evelyn replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Those are great!
Also, random question–how do you put pictures in your posts?
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