That was so phenomenal I don’t know what to say.
Lip-biting, leaning forward, scanning lines quick kind of reading.
And I didn’t see the twist of him turning himself in coming — that part really got me.
And the names are really cool.
*hopefully* Any chance there are more stories in their world? or about Fiddler?
Question: you know the comments feature in google docs? Would you like me to use that? How much feedback do you want? I’ll be glad to pour through it, I just don’t want to overwhelm you with far more feedback than you wanted ;P
Cuz like I know the feeling of not getting the needed feedback, but I also know the feeling of getting more than I care…[Read more]
*shuffles feet* *awkward smile*
Let’s just go through a typical first conversation.
“Hi! My name is [insert your name].”
“Hi! I’m Aysia.”
“Asia? Like the country?”
“Um. Sure.” *doesn’t…[Read more]
I can’t answer your questions, but — when you finish this story, let me know. Just from your description and passion, it sounds phenomenal and well-thought-through and exactly the kind of book I want to read.