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Aysia Serene commented on the post, Steady 7 years, 10 months ago
That was so phenomenal I don’t know what to say.
Lip-biting, leaning forward, scanning lines quick kind of reading.
Beautiful.
And I didn’t see the twist of him turning himself in coming — that part really got me.
And the names are really cool.
*hopefully* Any chance there are more stories in their world? or about Fiddler? -
Aysia Serene replied to the topic Oath: Of Wives And Women: Death Snippet in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Question: you know the comments feature in google docs? Would you like me to use that? How much feedback do you want? I’ll be glad to pour through it, I just don’t want to overwhelm you with far more feedback than you wanted ;P
Cuz like I know the feeling of not getting the needed feedback, but I also know the feeling of getting more than I care…[Read more]
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Aysia Serene's profile was updated 7 years, 10 months ago
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Aysia Serene replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
*quick breaths*
hi-im-aysia-and-honestly-even-this-small-guild-group-is-intimidating-because-there’s-so-much-creativity-and-enthusiasm-it’s-overwhelming
*shuffles feet* *awkward smile*
Let’s just go through a typical first conversation.
“Hi! My name is [insert your name].”
“Hi! I’m Aysia.”
“Asia? Like the country?”
“Um. Sure.” *doesn’t…[Read more]
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Aysia Serene commented on the post, Letter to a Wildflower Friend 7 years, 11 months ago
Almost cried at the third stanza.
This is phenomenal.
*bookmarks to look at anytime I feel sad* -
Aysia Serene replied to the topic Is my story to dark? in the forum Themes 7 years, 11 months ago
I can’t answer your questions, but — when you finish this story, let me know. Just from your description and passion, it sounds phenomenal and well-thought-through and exactly the kind of book I want to read.
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Aysia Serene changed their profile picture 7 years, 12 months ago
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