Silverclaw

Okay Parimis!

I’ve spent most of today tackling our entry, and have added a lot more character voice. That’s made the prose stronger, but to be honest, ‘unique’ is a rather cryptic phrase. However, we need to cut down a few words. So, cutting back is appreciated!

Once again, here is the…[Read more]

STELLAR WORK PARIMIS!!!!!

(Yes, I’m tagging you all cos I really will get confused with all of the scrolling and hunting for what different people have said. :P)

PROSE: Haha, Shakespeare is probably not an ideal thing to be weaving in. Doesn’t fit allllll that well. However, in general, we will need to be working on making the prose really…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Ah, maybe it’ll help if I clarify what I mean. Let’s take the Steampunk biome and ~1600s Europe put it in the following cases:
Case A: The Steampunk Biome has France, Germany, and Italy. The three countries all belong to the same biome, but politcally are seperate and distinct entities.
Case B: Each Biome solely has one…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Ah, yes, thank you.

Okay, sorry that I’ve been kinda chaotic and sporadic and stuff lately guys, but things have kinda been blegh and yeah. Anyways. I am here now and hopefully can make some suggestions.

BASICALLY, what @ariella-newheart summarised is what we are going with.

I really enjoy the ideas that are being thrown around, and my one concern is that we do…[Read more]

Okay, all of this sounds absolutely stellar. Like, really guys. Good job. I’m impressed.

NOTE: @steward-of-the-pen is close, there is a 2500 word limit. Jane only has so much time to go through all of them.

*sits back to think*

1. Plotline sounds brilliant, unique, and generally awesome.
2. The character sounds stellar.
3. The resulting c…

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Namarie! @metasua @lillian-parks03 @wysteriacampion

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Can I just say guys, you are doing awesomely here. O-o

I think I may spend all of tomorrow afternoon just going through these and collaborating some more things together and then responding to this stellar thread.

Also, I’m thinking that we may end up using some of our world building to have our own mini Parimi Alca tournaments? As in,…[Read more]

We have another member who can not make it with us any longer.

Namarie @Northerner ! *waves*

(and yes, ‘Namarie’ is Quenya for…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly No worries! I just wanted to make sure you were kept in the loop. And yup, those very same dragons!

@evelyn Yo, that’s a pretty sweet idea- it makes sense for the political head of a region to be invested in either promoting or outright controlling the manufacturing process, and for people to try and subvert…[Read more]

@consciousdreamer Ah, good idea with the Google Doc.

@coggleton @writercatherine More good ideas! I would imagine that anyone could use a Dragonling, but using Drakes would take formal education and Great Dragons would require years of training, maybe first as an apprentice after learning how to use Drakes. There would probably be very few people…[Read more]

@j-a-penrose @steward-of-the-pen @evelyn Thanks for the vote of confidence! And excellent questions @writercatherine . My thoughts on those working with dragons is that while they might be seen as elite, how much depends really on the social context; a farmer who gets a new drake might be the talk of the town, like some guy who gets a new…[Read more]