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STELLAR WORK PARIMIS!!!!!

(Yes, I’m tagging you all cos I really will get confused with all of the scrolling and hunting for what different people have said. :P)

PROSE: Haha, Shakespeare is probably not an ideal thing to be weaving in. Doesn’t fit allllll that well. However, in general, we will need to be working on making the prose really strong and unique. I’ll go all out on a paragraph at some point today, *fingers crossed* provided my health is fairly stable, so that you can get a bit more of an idea.

As for Meter, well, you may be surprised at this, but most of us do it naturally. You can tell when a sentence doesn’t flow well or when it’s too choppy and you change it. Some authors do have set meters, (pretty sure Tolkien did that for dialogue) and that can be very cool too…but may be an overkill.

PLOT/THE WRITING: First up…STELLAR JOB. *throws confetti* This is going so well and ahhhh, you guys are awesome! The idea of weaving the backstory in is also really good, and will give us more words to play around with. *nodnod* Good idea guys!

TELLING: The Show Don’t Tell is improving! Yay! We’ll keep going through to refine it, but good job guys!

OVER ALL: You guys are awesome! I’m loving how so many of you are pitching in to help. And those who haven’t, don’t worry! You’ve still got time! Thanks so much Parimis! <33

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