Selah CJW

@eden-anderson

Hey! Thanks for starting this topic! Super awesome! 🙂 (And it really got me thinking)

Your story sounds so intriguing. And sad. I can definitely tell that it’s going to be very well written :).

@wolverinerm

It eats my posts like ALL the time so I have gotten into the habit of copying what I have written so that just in case it…[Read more]

@vic

AND I just read your 3rd portion! **Thumbs up**

I liked how you portray Diane’s character and personality. You do a great job of showing how she is really shy and quiet/reserved 🙂

Is this going to be a long book-type story, or is it going to be a short story? Just wondering’ (cause I love your work so far! 🙂

MEL

@arindown

Yeah, good idea!

Well, I’ll share Marrill bc she is basically me lol!

She’s 13, has shoulder-length hair (it’s red, which mine isn’t lol!) She’s an only child…okay so a few things that aren’t like me haha! She loves animals and owns tons of them.

And here’s a snippet from her…

Marrill bounced along the dusty road in the back of…[Read more]

@vic

Hello! I really enjoyed reading the second portion of your story!!! Great job!

One thing I enjoy when reading your story is that even though you are writing in 3rd person, I almost feel like it is written in 1st because you help readers picture her and know what she is thinking and going through.

MEL

@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h@anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior

Let me know what you think. Still don’t know exactly how this is gonna end. 😏 Next scene is under construction and will be up soonish. Maybe by tomorrow but I’m working so it might be Monday.

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Her doorbell rang and Liz jumped. Calm down! she scolded h…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 I have no knowledge about beekeeping, lol! Notice I don’t explain anything about what she needs to do… 😆 I just wanted to include details about her “normal” life. Though, I have no idea if she could actually do legit beekeeping with a travel itinerary… do you have to take care of them every day, or can you kinda leave them t…[Read more]

@arindown I guess I’ll share a bit about my three main characters…

Micah Radcliffe: An analytical, ambitious businessman. Blonde hair, blue eyes, tinted glasses. President of the Roses. Constantly in a power struggle with the other gang leaders of Heather Flights. Micah’s very confident in his own abilities and the power that he holds, which…[Read more]

@emma-starr

Yes! Someone else who doesn’t think action is a necessary for a heartfull story (what’s heartfull anyway?😆 I think I just made it up).

I have that discussion all the time with my brother. When I watched LOTR I loved Frodo’s story, and my very favorite part of the whole movie was when Boromir died.😭 But, my brother was convinced tha…[Read more]

@eden-anderson @wolverinerm @beth20 @chalice @devastate-lasting @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @emma-starr

Sooo…now that we’ve all got to hear a little about each-other’s stories, I was wondering if everyone would like to share some of their characters?😊

Tell us what they look like, why you like them, personality, strength/weaknesses, and mayb…[Read more]

@eden-anderson Oh my goodness yess! Let me know if you ever need a //snippet reader// :)))

I play piano and sing as my main instruments. I just started ukulele, but that’s more of a for-fun side thing. 🙂 Do you play any instruments??

THANK YOU. *happy crying* That means a lot to me!! I’m a poet trying to write a story and that’s just very…[Read more]

@vic

You have a wonderful way of expressing things with your words. I really enjoyed reading the new portion! Great job! I especially liked the part about detracting attention by attracting it in a totally different way. Super cool. 👍:D

@eden-anderson Haha I try not make things too scary… I’m usually very self-unaware when it comes to the content I’m writing, actually.

@devastate-lasting Well, you know what they say…better late then never! Welcome to the party! 😀

Ooh, your story sounds VERY mysterious and fun! Also scary. 😄

@emma-starr Aww, thanks, friend! 😍 I’m hoping it will turn out good. *fingers-crossed*

Ooh, really? What instrument(s) do you play?!

YOU’RE STORY SOUND LIKE ABSOLUTE GOLD. (I was…[Read more]

@arindown

Yeah that’s totally it!!

My sister and I have dozens of code words that we’ll randomly say and everyone else is clueless. 😂😂

It’s awesome!! #sisterlife. LOL

@vic

Nice!! I love it!

Random thing: She’s a beekeeper?! 😀 My mom has kept bees for about 9 years? Give or take? So anyways I always find it cool to come across characters and “real” people alike who at least have some correct knowledge of bees 🙂

@arindown. Thanks!! :)) This is actually my first story //ever// so I’m trying to make sure my plot is good etc. I’m a poet, so I’m trying not to get too caught up in description. XD

Thank you for the encouragement!!

@arindown I would say while there is some action, it’s centered more around Micah and his brother’s relationship, as well as their relationship with the drug dealers. Maybe a bit more of a crime drama.

I would call that an alternate history. I myself am still looking for what genre that is not fantasy contains only one fantastical element.…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting Ohhh, your story sounds like something by brothers would like. Are you leaning toward action/adventure?

Also, you said you have a story that you’re not sure is “fantasy.” I have one too. It’s in a totally different world, and different time, with different animals and things, but there is no magic/power stuff at all. Would it s…[Read more]