Samuel Bergman

@toklaham-veruzia Wow, thanks for all the awesome feedback! I’ll definitely keep it all in mind as I edit the story more. Did you have any ideas for how to make the ending less predictable? That seems to be a common issue in most of my stories XP.

It looks like a few tags didn’t work, so I’m tagging @maddie-jay @i-david @kr-lalonde @samberg0…[Read more]

@i-david
Thanks!!

All that being said, just because my creative well is sort of dry at the moment, if any of you wonderful knapsack toting adventurers have an idea or thought you’d like to share, don’t hold back. You don’t have to run everything by me, and guildlings are more than welcome to start activities that the guildmaster did not. I wil…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Hi! So glad you found us!

Alright, so for things to do, Knaphollow is currently in a word war (I believe I tagged you to it) over on the general forum. For that all you do is keep track of the words you write (creatively—no grocery lists allowed, unfortunately for me) and then submit them on the form linked in that p…[Read more]

Knaphollow forever!

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard @toklaham-veruzia…[Read more]

Congratulations! Can’t wait to read it!!

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-ba…[Read more]

@kjames0813 congrats, Kayla!!! I’m excited to read.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace <…[Read more]

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard @toklaham-veruzia @ryowildfire @sailorj @Willa

@ryowildfire
Hi! Welcome to knaphollow! Feel free to post in the critique section any time! (And the others too, but I noticed in your bio you mentioned wanting to join a critique group) we’re glad to have you.

I’ll tag everyone else so you guys can get to know each other

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite [Read more]

The results are in!
You can see the other entries and your feedback here.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10KGCPHcF2MNY1OASKYD2YwRblGFty24DstWyrrgIBfc/edit?usp=sharing

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde…[Read more]

Ok, here are my thoughts, since we’re not really getting a ton of feedback from the other
You both wrote equally wonderful, yet totally different stories. There are so many things I love about each of them and I think either one is a worthy entry.

@jennythefaun, do you WANT to enter your story? I don’t want you to feel pressured, so if you…[Read more]

Hey guys? Where we at? Are we decided?

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard…[Read more]

If you guys haven’t already, check out both stories and offer any feedback you have. Our deadline for submission is this Monday morning

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0…[Read more]

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @samberg0
@naomi-sowell @misspenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard @toklaham-veruzia @maddiejay

PLEASE READ:…[Read more]