RoseMaryLouise

                                                                Hem of Healing

Ever since I heard of Jesus, I thought and prayed how I might get near Him. If only I could offer a sacrifice at the Temple, perhaps God would grant my request. But no, the Law forbade it. Even if I could draw near, I had little to offer. All my money had been sp…[Read more]

@rosemarylouise – No problem, hope it was helpful. I added one more little note about adjectives/adverbs for your perusal. 🙂

So what’s your next project? You know what they say, “Write what you know.” This piece was a great example of that. Anything else from your family life, school friends/teachers or anything you could write about? Draw on…[Read more]

@rosemarylouise Ooh, I should go check that story out. 😉

@daeus-lamb Thanks, and I understand what you’re saying. The thing about my religious system is that there are people that are supposed to represent Christians, and basically the story is going to be written with them as the good guys (like the protagonist learns from them and changes her…[Read more]

@rosemarylouise Everyone else had done so many comments I think there’s plenty there already, but I wanted to tell you that I did read through it. 🙂 And I loved it. Everything about writer’s block, to the sweet older brother, to the new prescriptive on writing. Pretty sure once you go through it one more time with everyone’s input it’ll be awesome. 🙂

Ohh, itewesting.

1. I think it definitely makes the characters more unique, and unique helps make characters deeper. It’s the 2D, cardboard-ish characters we forget easily, that seem shallow. Deep characters have strong motivations and desires, intense passion for their goal, etc., but if this is all cookie-cutter, it’ll fall flat. The depth has…[Read more]

@rosemarylouise

Great! Thanks for sharing 🙂 I put comments on the document itself. I’m guessing the others are racking up word counts for the new guild war, but I’ll tag a few for later on 🙂

@kate @msqueen8 @r-m-archer @elizabeth @Uh, anybody else we should tag, ladies? 🙂

@rosemarylouise I’ve never read it, but that sounds extremely interesting!

@daeus-lamb I don’t have a character who speaks funny, but I do try to give each character a different voice. I’m not sure how well it’s working, but it’s safe to say that they don’t all sound identical. I think it would be fun to try writing a character who speaks oddly,…[Read more]

Hey guys, so we do have the winner announced.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y0wO4a23Ft-Gh6R87FmvVV19MgCj4ldlv4kMEYRsjH4/edit?usp=sharing

@cindy @kate @elizabeth @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @m_cornnemusic @j-parkhurst @gabbyj @sierra @cassandria @chalice @noahlitle @julianne @germaine-han @maddiejay @sesi @r-j-karas @arrethtreat @rose…[Read more]

@chalice *wipes tear with you*

@m_corinnemusic @germaine-han @literatureforthelight Thanks.

@literatureforthelight It did, but the process was enjoyable, and the effort was worth it.

@rosemarylouise I thought it was you. Thank you for your input.

♪♫Celebrate good times! Come on!♫♪

Or maybe I should sing:

♪♫Everything is Awesome!!!♫♪

High fives, fist-bumps, and awkward hugs all around!

Thank you, @r-j-karas @literatureforthelight @cindy @sesi @Alana Ward (sorry, I don’t know what your tag is) @r-m-archer @ethryndal @m_corinnemusic @gabbyj and @anonymous for all your input on the fi…[Read more]

@r-j-karas Thanks. XD I was going to ask about that.

Last day, guys. I plan on doing some serious editing on it this morning. I would appreciate anyone who could be there with me, or at least keep an eye on it. I’ll be keeping an eye peeled here, but I’ll mostly be on the Google doc. Planning on being there sometime around 10:30 or so.

See you…[Read more]

@rosemarylouise

Is that the Broadway Beauty and the Beast? I really like that one! Les Mis is awesome! Do you have a favourite character or song?

@rosemarylouise

I prefer musicals (usually the ones based on classics, like The Count of Monte Cristo, Les Miserables, The Secret Garden etc) but I do listen to a sprinkling of Christian artists, like Casting Crowns and I like Australian country too 🙂

And I like your culture/history mixing! I do that too and its a lot of fun!

Okay, here it is:

Fish

It’s only a little different from the original.

Let me know what y’all think.

@daeus-lamb @r-m-archer @cindy @kate @r-j-karas @rosemarylouise @gabbyj @germaine-han @julianne @ethryndal @msqueen8 @m_corinnemusic @literatureforthelight @maddiejay @samuel @chalice @sesi

@kate @rosemarylouise Thanks!

I like Dough-boy.

@ethryndal @sesi   :-   Mmm-

Honestly, I had thought of Emeril, but didn’t think it fit the fish or the human very well. I could get over that though, if you guys like it.

@sesi How does it sound fishy?

Also, keep in mind: the title doesn’t have to have the fish’s name in it. Maybe we could foc…[Read more]