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Mel replied to the topic Collaborative Story Details Posting in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Character THREE (Loser of the Cullings):
Name: Ryumon Polit
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Tall and thin, not very muscular. Curly, short, blonde hair, brown eyes
Weapons: Umm, I don’t know.
Clothing:

Personality: Shy, but not if you can become a close friend to him. He is a servant to those around him. He is a Christian, a…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for the feedback, and the new planet info! Btw, Motrya sounds really interesting, almost dystopian.
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
I’m pretty sure that Mr. B dies… I was thinking it would be at the end of the story, so the end of the trilogy, because if he dies at the end of the first book, and Andor turns good at the same time, then who is our villain??
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Yeah, I guess ‘only 40,000 words’ doesn’t sound that great, but it’s better than 200,000,…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Ok, one corrupt government official at a time. Got it. 😊
If we were to do two or three players, maybe a third player is difficult to register, so only the super developed/high countries get one. It’s kind of unfair to the lower countries, but much of the government is controlled by wealthy people anyway.
And I think that we’re alm…[Read more]
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
You mentioned way earlier that Kix was going to find his father’s old Elite Unit stuff, and then join the EU. Is that still what you are doing?
Well, yeah! But that would mean he would not only be in the EU, but also a branch. Maybe the leader of the EU asks the judges’ permission to take Kix on as his apprentice, and so maybe Kix doe…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@melodyjoy @mischievous-thwapling
Thanks for the info!
===I think we should definitely do that. It works perfectly with your country, and we need that warrior camp for Vika to weasel her way into. There’s so much corruption and fraud surrounding theses games it seems, with Andor’s fake guise, Vika sneaking in, the losers being tak…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
My Planet: Ethrior. (pronounced Eth-RY-or)
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My country: Adyura (pronounced Ad-YUR-uh)
Allor Hulls, and Wren Hulls.
Wealthy. Many people there hold a position in the government, and almost everyone goes to really expensive collages.
Warm (not hot though) pretty much all year round, and summery. They have wond…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
So, everyone, I’m attempting to make a ‘map’ of all our planets and where they are. Could each of you give the name of your planets, countries, and the name of the players for each country? And also possibly the temperature and social position of the country, if you…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Something less dramatic could maybe be like some form of sniper assassination? That’s still kind of dramatic though…
I kind of think we should change it, but we’re all used to Andor by now! I feel like this name works for him, but I think it’d be best to look for something new. We could continue to use Andor as a place…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Thanks!! 😀
And yeah, I’m still thinking about my character’s branches too. *also grabs snack and absentmindedly pops it into mouth while staring into to space in thought*
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Uhhhh…. I think? I don’t know exactly.
And yeah! I get what you mean. That makes sense. I think that would work for the judicial branch, what about…[Read more]
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@melodyjoy @mischievous-thwapling
Thanks so much (it helps to have others make decisions for me)! I’ll think more about Nori, but I’ll probably choose diplomat. It sounds more interesting then making up laws anyway, LOL
As for Kix, eesshh…. I’ll have to think more about him. *sigh, thinking thinking….grabs snack… thinking thinking*…[Read more]
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
I don’t have three, and am completely fine with two. I just brought it up because @joelle-stone mentioned that one of her characters is from the same country as someone else’s two characters, making three per country. This was also from a while ago and may have changed.
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
OH, YEP, I found it. It’s on page eight, and it was actually something I brought up, ironically. So I also made a mistake in the Cullings Comprehensive Guide. *sigh* Sorry everyone!
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So, we have two players competing per country. Is there a possibility of three, or is it only two?
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winter_rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Oh. On part of the details posting it says one player per country, but I posted that part so it could’ve been a mistake. I was under the impression that we had only one player per country this whole time. We could just change it to two players, because I’m not sure how it was before now.
@wingiby-iggiby @joelle-stone @melodyjoy
I’ll…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you!!! I’m so happy that you guys let me join!
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Here they are!! (My characters are twins, BTW)
Name: Allor Hulls
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Has dark eyes, though they’re a bit lighter than his Wren’s. He’s usually frowning, but when he smiles his dimples flash. He’s also a little gangly, and has shaggy black hair. And he has a broad nose.
Clothing: Uhhh.. working on that.
We…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@wingiby-iggiby and @melodyjoy
Lol, I know, right? I love it when stuff like that music happens. 😀
MEL:
Okee-dokee, gotcha. I thought that was how I was supposed to do it, but I wasn’t a 100% sure. 😉
And I’m about to post my characters now… I just have to go over them one more time to make sure everything looks right. 🙂
WINGIBY…[Read more]
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you!! And yes, I changed Kix’s stuff and added Nori. I had intended to have two characters, but had only developed Kix at that time 😉 Thx for posting it in the details page for me! 😀
And thanks for Mr. B! I know it isn’t really the best, which is why I need help. My brain juice ran dry.
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Yay, I’m glad I wasn’t imposing!! And thank you! I’m glad I could encourage you 😀
And I love your characters!! They sound really unique and well-rounded! (Like they’re balanced and developed, not that they’re round in shape XD)
Yeah!!! I LOVED it all! When I read Andor’s backstory, my siblings’ show that they were…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic Opening Lines… in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago
@melodyjoy, I think “I fumbled with my keys” isn’t necessarily a lame first line at all. It certainly raises questions, which is exactly what we want those first lines to do. What needs unlocked? Why is the speaker agitated/nervous? I’d read on…
@writergirl101, LOL! Best of luck.
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