McNoggin

@mcnoggin Hopefully today.

Attention friends!

I’ve gone through and made a couple edits. I’ll be going through and finalizing them later today, but I wanted to give you a chance beforehand to take a look at them. You can let me know if there’s anything you disagree with and with some of the edits I’ve included explanations which I hope will be helpful to you as you go off…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb Haha, all good.

@mcnoggin Ooooh, looking nice! I’ll go and make a few suggestions on the doc.

Great work, @mcnoggin — especially with your colors and metaphors.

I’ll get to making some edits to this tomorrow (hopefully others can add their improvements today), but I just wanted to go ahead and share a couple of my initial thoughts.

• I generally prefer opening a scene with the POV character as opposed to anything else that’s going on…

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@mcnoggin whoo-hoo! I really love that. Great job.

My thoughts…

• I’m super impressed you managed to pack that amount of punch in so few words.
• I feel like the main character is a teenaged boy instead of a little girl, but I’m not entirely certain it matters too much.
• I would take out the MC’s first line of dialogue: ‘The beginning of the…

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@mcnoggin Don’t worry about it. Once we have a first draft we’ll polish it up nice.

@mcnoggin Well, technically we can submit it as late as Monday, but we don’t want to push that limit. Aiming to have it ready by Saturday is a good goal. If you could have the story finished by today or Friday then, that would help us have time to edit it.

@mcnoggin lol. XD

@mcnoggin creativity and Canva. ;P

*clears throat nervously*

So… guys. I made a thing. What do you think?

@daeus-lamb @ethryndal @elizabeth @mcnoggin @grace @livgiordano @j-a-penrose @theresa-play @everyone else I missed

@J-A-Penrose @Mcnoggin Hi, you guys! Glad to have you.

Lovely thoughts, everyone.

Just to clarify for all still confused— IT IS A SUNRISE.

I feel like a combination of @mcnoggin‘s take and @Corissa‘s ‘sarcastic’ take could be really powerful. What do you guys think?

Heya everyone! Sorry, this week is pretty busy for me!! I may be able to contribute a bit Wednesday though. And…I’ll just throw some ideas out here this morning and y’all can run with them….

When you see a sunrise, it’s like there’s color in the sky and then just a pure flaming ball of gold, and you feel like all the nightmares were just ph…[Read more]

Like @r-m-archer @kate and @mcnoggin I think we should put the description into a story, which can provide oppurtunities for character, dialogue, and symbolic/thematic meaning of the sunrise itself. Besides, 2,500 words is a lot for a stand-alone description.

@daeus-lamb When do we need to submit by?

EEEEEEP! HI EVERYONE! Sorry I’m late!

Can’t wait to get to know you all more! This looks like an awesome guild. *hands out pizza and lembas*

@daeus-lamb
@cindy
@r-m-archer
@lady-iliara
@kate
@elizabeth

@j-parkhurst

@ethryndal

@livgiordano

@girlsetfree

@m_corinnemusic

@theresa-play

@literatureforthelight

@lenakarynn

@mcnoggin

@mcnoggin nope, don’t think so. I think we’re waiting for a few more of our guild members to respond with their thoughts.

@mcnoggin wow, your zeal is commendable, but yes, I think the idea was to all collaborate on one entry. ;P

@mcnoggin @cindy @kate @ ethryndal @elizabeth @ girlsetfree @theresa-play @r- m-archer @ literatureforthelight @ livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_ corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @daeus-lamb

Hold on a minute – does our guild only submit one submission? Or can we all submit one and try to take a victory for our guild? Because I’ve already started working on my own.