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@kayla-skywriter

Hey! I’ll try to answer your while I have time! Tomorrow’s gonna be one busy day making syrup.

Well I’m pretty sure the government runs the tower of Punishment. As far as the people who are sent there, I believe it would be criminals and rebels or people suspected of being rebels.

@mayacat @urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton…[Read more]

@urwen-starial

You can go ahead. I’m not going to have a lot of time today or tomorrow to post. I’ve got to boil sap to make maple syrup.

@mayacat
<p style=”text-align: left;”>Well. I think I want most everyone to escape. Maybe one or two could get captured. I don’t think they would have any reason to stay there. I’d think most of them would…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Thanks! And that’s a good one too!

@kari-karast @mayacat @urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani

@kari-karast @mayacat @urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @dakota @naiya-dyani

Here’s another pic

@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton

Any ideas of what the newspaper insignia should be?

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kayla-skywriter @dakota @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kari-karast @naiya-dyani @anyone I forgot (I feel so bad if I did)

Like I said too, it’s just an idea. A lot of my ideas have been accepted into this world, so I’m fine if some of ’em don’t. 🙂

I have a few notes.

Do we have a newspaper and a radio station? If…[Read more]

@urwen-starial @mayacat

Hey, what are you all wanting to happen with the Knot House and everything?

@mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @kari-karast @trallion @esmeralda-gramilton @naiya-dyani @dakota

Cade

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“I have a message for you.” Kenma told them. “The government’s found the location of the Knot House, and are sending out a group of men right now to take us by surprise at the meeting. They don’t k…[Read more]

@kayla-skywriter  I personally like Citrine. And thanks! Good work with Pasha

@mayacat Thanks!! You’re part was awesome! I’ll have Cade’s part up in a jiffy.

@esmeralda-gramilton Thank you. Good job on yours as well. I really like Sandrye.

@mayacat

You’re welcome 😉

Awesome 🙂 That’s so cool xD

Yes, I know what that’s like 🙂

Wow..that’s a lot 😉

I’ve only heard of a few of them. They sound cool tho 🙂

When you said the Misty books, do you mean like Misty of Chincoteague?   If so, I like those books too. Kinda comes with being a horse fan lol.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @urwen-starial @dakota @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton

Here’s my dog’s next part

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Pasha padded down the alleyway. His paws hurt and were sluffing away with. He whined. He hadn’t seen any food. He sniffed again. Nope. Still nothing.

Well, one smell was new. The boy was walking before him. Pasha sniffed…[Read more]

@mayacat Hee hee, cliffhangers. . . the only way to end chapters. ;D

I have only seen so much of your writing, so I won’t be able to give specific advice yet, but off the top of my head, there are a couple of things that come to mind. One is to make sure your readers already care so much about your characters that they’re actually concerned when…[Read more]

Okay, here to reply and get caught up with everyone before my writing.

@urwen-starial It’s fine, I’d have a harder time if you and Emberynus didn’t work out all those worldbuilding details.

@esmeralda-gramilton Thanks, I might work on writing stuff for a character I’m thinking about bringing in while I wait.

@naiya-dyani I thought so, I just…[Read more]

@mayacat O.o You three are related? So that’s why you can talk to each other so often in real life. . . I thought you were just friends from dance lolol XD

I love writing cliffhangers, too!

But. . . I don’t know if mine are cliche. Also, how do you insert an ‘e’ with a mark over it? I haven’t figured it out yet.

@mayacat, I’m sorry, but honestly, your cliffhangers tend to be very short cliffs. No offense. But otherwise, your writing is great!

Um. . . how do you make a cliffhanger non-cliche? The…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer That chocolate was the best. Thank you. Hopefully I never run out. And nice job with your Cade chapter, btw.

@mayacat Nice job!

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

That was amazing! and sad. But amazing! I think that works out really well.

@mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @kari-karast @trallion @esmeralda-gramilton @naiya-dyani @dakota

Welp, here goes nothing 🙂

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Kenma lay in a heap on the…[Read more]

@mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @kari-karast @trallion @esmeralda-gramilton @naiya-dyani @dakota

Here’s the next part about Cade. It’s super long I’m afraid!😬 (LOL I just realized that rhymed XD XD) Sorry!

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“Cade. . . Cade,” a little voice cried out as Cade hurried down the long row of cot…[Read more]

@mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @kari-karast @trallion @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FCsJbVD3xY2-7754fDri9XHn76nx6Zy0Dhyqit61kpQ/edit?usp=sharing

Here’s the link to the poetry doc.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer yeah, Google doc would probably be better.

@naiya-dyani Okay! Her last post was a bit earlier in time, so I’m gonna come up with a way to get her out there at that time. Maybe after she runs  into Kedori and then the two of them come upon them taking Kiet to the tower and they follow them (especially since Kedori…[Read more]