KingdomFire7

“Ladies, help the blind man, would you?” Julian teased

@denali-christianson

Okay WHAAATTTTT?!!!!!

Did Yila just die??? Please clarify😭😭😭

@rose-colored-fancy

Whew, that’s like four countries far XD I can never quite conceptualize how massive America is.

No kidding.

It originally started out as a “LOL, Liorah’s being stupid and impulsive” scene, but when I actually wrote it it was surprisingly sad. She’s trying so hard and pushing herself beyond her breaking point to make that miss…

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@rose-colored-fancy I think I’ll skip the heart-tearing and just punch her. That would be far more to the point and satisfying. Of course she’d just grin, but I’d be out of the castle by that time, so I wouldn’t see. I’m soooo loving who Aydin has become, PLEASE keep developing him into this man!!! I know that one day he won’t even care and that…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

WHYYYYYYYY THIS IS AWFUL TIMING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHH I’M GOING TO M U R D E R H E R R I G H T N O W

Why are you hurting my sweet cinnamon roll? ROSE!!!!! Aydin’s been through so much already WHYYYYYYYY

*pointedly ignores the fact that I just murdered my character*

@emily-waldorf

Oh goodness, you’re also conspiring to break my heart 😭😭 I love how Qatar is finally starting to act like a good big brother! I’m so proud of both of them!

I’m asking you all to forgive me in advance 😭

Chantara

He was here. I’d known he’d be here, but it still startled me.

My aquamarine gaze followed him as he crossed the heaps…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I’M SORRYYYYY!!!!! I COULDN’T HELP IT!!!!!!!!

*Sobs in distance*

*Joins you in sobbing*

I will post later. I have to do school and grieve Yila… :'(

Quin/Qatar

With a roar the dragon woke, demanding who had disturbed it.  Quin shrank from the heat, a flashback pushing at the back of his brain.

“Qatar,” he spoke through a fog. “Do you have a–knife? Anything?”

His brother looked down at him, the small knife the Castle had given them in his hand. “It won’t do much against that.” he nodded at…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT WORSE?????? I’M ALREADY GRIEVING HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME EVEN MORE SADDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also… sorry. No Qatar treatment… Yila’s gone…

I’M SORRYYYYY!!!!! I COULDN’T HELP IT!!!!!!!!

*Sobs in distance*

@calidris

Tell me if you ever need someone to punch Dr Corvo. I volunteer 😀

Also how d a r e y…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Yep, like 13 hours or something.

Whew, that’s like four countries far XD I can never quite conceptualize how massive America is.

I think one reason I can write for longer periods is that I give the quality of my prose…significantly less thought than most people. xD

Hah, same. XD I often reread only to find I’ve forgotten a word or w…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

One google search later* That’s a really long road trip! That’s from here to Italy! It sounds like you all had a good time!

Yep, like 13 hours or something.

You finished? A l r e a d y?? Wow, count me impressed!!! I can’t wait to read it!

I think one reason I can write for longer periods is that I give the quality of my prose..…[Read more]

Pia shot him a glare.

Kallun nodded and held out his arm to K’Nika again. “It’ll take a while for my eyes to adjust, you’ll have to lead me.”

@erynne

 I know you’re just dying to hear how my dude-like voice sounds

Nooo, you have such a pretty voice! It was cool to hear it 🙂

@noah-cochran

My apologies for the belated response, life has been busy, but in a good way. My family and I are on our way back from Georgia state, and all of its great weather, people, and tall pines.

Don’t worry about it! I’m glad to hear from you!

Ohh, that sounds like so much fun! *One google search later* That’s a really long road trip!…[Read more]

Vitus Corvo:

6’5” of bone and sinew, purest blood and sharpest instinct.

200 pounds of raw nerve and muscle, carefully curated for a single purpose – to kill and destroy, and perhaps in due time, to be destroyed by one stronger than he.

I don’t suppose he will ever know how much I sacrificed to save him from that fate, but it’s enough for me…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thank you, Brian!! You’re so kind 😊

That is just my prologue, so I didn’t put too much detail in it as I would for a chapter. When that part of the story happens, I will definitely include the detail it’s missing.

Unfortunately, that part of my book is planned but not yet written. I thought doing this would motivate…[Read more]

well darn

Julian snorted. His eyes were quickly becoming adjusted to the light, since he had been out earlier.

“It is frustrating, isn’t it?” Ellie said gently to him.

Hi Erynne (@erynne),

I am so glad you did this!

Here are some of the questions I answered for this scene. Since there is only this one part, some of the questions were not relevant, but I would love to hear a subsequent scene following and connected to this moment here.

1. Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this…[Read more]

No she’s growing because he practically goes blind in sunlight lol

”not very. We should see it soon.” K’Nika replied, glancing at Kallun. “Are you alright?”
“blast light.”

(Is she frowning because he chose K’Nika to let go of instead of Ellie??? :D)

“How long until we get to the river, did you say?” Julian asked