K. A. Grey

@k-a-grey

I also just wanted to note that I have looked up and researched the FiNi loop. I’ve only done a little research, but it revealed certain patterns that I could see in myself. So, I just want to say thank you for suggesting this source. 😀

@k-a-grey

Hey y’all, I enjoyed both of them.

I think my vote is going for @winter_rose but Emily’s was real close.

Happy writing!

@this-is-not-an-alien @k-a-grey

Thank you both for your feedback!

I’m not used to working with such a small word count, so it was helpful to see the areas that I need to polish.

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@emily-waldorf

Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?

It is part of a much larger story, at least I want it to be. Right now it’s still in the…[Read more]

@k-a-grey Absolutely not–and if it makes you feel better, I already knew that, because I cannot write an argument. (Okay, I think maybe I wrote one). It ends up being precisely the problem you saw: they’re arguing over nothing, and because you the reader could care less about, say, coffee filters, you just sorta roll your eyes because they’re…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

Alright, I’ll be sure to check them out! 😀

When I’m caught up a FiNi loop, my brain alternates from manically exploring every nitty gritty detail of my surrounding environment (aka all the interesting stuff on my desk, all the different colors, shapes, and details of this stuff, all my fish tanks and all the motion and color inside…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

I’d like to join!

But… I’m not exactly sure how I can show introspection from more than one person’s PoV. Should I switch viewpoints or something like that?

@k-a-grey

Haha great thank you so much!! I don’t even have a single word of it written and I’ve already got two people that want to be beta readers XD

If you have any questions about it feel free to ask 😝

@Emma-walker You dont have to. I guess I meant you know my characters better

@k-a-grey

Lol I really have thought that to myself….

I LOVE The Giver! I’ve never seen or read Animal Farm or 1984 but I’ve heard a ton about them especially from our conservative news thing. The Hunger Games is one of my favorite book and movies.

One of the reason…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

Fi-Ni loop? I think I may have heard something like that before…  that would also explain why I feel the way I do, to an extent. What other interesting MBTI facts do you have, about anything in particular?

@k-a-grey

Hey no you did fine! Lol as time has gone on more questions have been added mostly by the wonderful Emma walker

I will get back to you but I’m curious to see how @Emma-walker sees him since she knows my story pretty well.

Also I saw you mention that you consider yourself a big conservative. Good for you so do I 😁

Just wanted to say…[Read more]

@k-a-grey possibly could

@noah-cochran, @this-is-not-an-alien, @k-a-grey

Judge’s Decision

Cathy: Gender…I can’t decide. It seems like it should be male, but I’m guessing female

Noah: Gender: male

Grey: Gender: female

(Now you guys have to tell us when all the judging is over–you know that, right?)

My vote goes to @noah-cochran.

Thanks for the…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

You can join whenever you’d like! I like using Pinterest for my characters or different actors I like. You’re welcome to guess for anyone’s characters in the meantime! I have a dude on the last page that hasn’t been done yet

@k-a-grey lol I don’t even try to understand the character castles lol

@k-a-grey

Sorry about that! but yeah, you did a good job explaining, thank you.  Yeah, this system isn’t perfect, but it’s our first prompt battle, so there’s room for improvement.  If any has a better idea, please share

No problem, and yeah, the system is fine, it’s just kinda difficult to do blind voting when the judges can see each other’s…[Read more]

@calidris

Sure. @k-a-grey should be directing you not me, but they seem to have vanished. xD

This is what you’re supposed to do according to Grey:

So some things for the judge(s)to keep in mind…

Try to guess what the main character’s gender was
Did the emotion feel authentic or cliched?
How was the quality of the prose?

The judge(s) can the…

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@Noah-Cochran

Oh shoot I forgot about you. Just you specifically, I remembered everyone else.

Am I still a judge? Never mind Im doing it anyway

@this-is-not-an-alien @k-a-grey

Catapult-

Yours is definitely a girl.

I could real feel the intense emotion and it definitely wasn’t cliched. However, the style of the writing wasn’t the easiest to…[Read more]

*nods* Ok, what about…KNIFE GIRL!!! @josie-m, Knife Girl, would you do us the honor of being one of the judges? And @storysmith? And @erynne of course! Both should be…reasonably unbiased judged probably (:

Ok so there’s three answers above to this prompt right now–by me, @k-a-grey and @noah-cochran–and the prompt is: write a scene with a…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

I would recommend having two judges agree on a winner, but it’s up to you. 🙂