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@vic

Ok that was EPIC!! I love this kinda thing! I love reading stuff that gets my blood pumping. And killers with musical instruments is totally my thing 😆 LOL

I likeall of @claire-h ‘s suggestions. 🙂

@vic This was really cool! I enjoyed your vivid writing style. I also thought it was cool how she’s an assassin and a violinist.

Here’s a thought I had for a direction that you <i>could</i> take this: maybe Liz is a an assassin whose boss gives her assignments and she kills people without really knowing them. Then she ends up killing someone she…[Read more]

@vic

You’re welcome! 😀

@claire-h Great suggestions! Thank you! I’m also a violinist, so that’s where that comes from…. 😉

@anne_the_noob14 I hadn’t thought about Judy as being pivotal, but I like that idea. Thanks so much!

@vic

OOOooooooo ok so I really love this?? That was really good!! 😀 😀

As far as suggestions go, I agree with what Claire already said about the different questions you could ask yourself. And reading through it again, Judy hit me as someone who could be pivotal, if you wanted her to be. She seems like she could know things. 🙂

Great job!! 😀

*applause*

First of all, I love this. (One reason being that I’m a violinist) So cool. Great job!

Now for suggestions… Maybe just ask yourself some questions. Who is Liz? Does she work for herself? Is she a paid assassin? The member of a secret society? An undercover agent? Who is the man she shot? How does killing people make her feel? Is she…[Read more]

@bigideaskc

*waves hand frantically*

I do! I looove Sherlock Holmes- some of my fav writing EVER. 🙂

@pensword

I really like the Basil Rathbone/Nigel Bruce movies. Really well done in my opinion, especially compared to some of the new ones that aren’t really my fav. XD

LOL! 😂

Ahhh. Yeah, that makes sense. I’m not a fan of that at all. I have a character of a Sherlock Holmes fan-fiction who is also the sister of Sherlock (Aylen Holmes) who has a lot of deductive power/skill, but she has an equally big mental flaw to combat that, haha.

Awesome to see a fellow Holmesian!

@bigideaskc

Haha. 😀 It’s true. If I ever meet anyone who doesn’t like Sherlock Holmes I’d be super surprised. (Now watch, I’ll probably meet someone who doesn’t)

The Enola Holmes were a bit big on having her be super powerful, like a super girl I guess, but they were still fun to read.

-Katja

Enola Holmes – yes, I remember seeing that before! 😀 I’d like to read those one day, haha. And yeah, totally agree with you on that first part, LOL!

@bigideaskc

If anyone doesn’t like Sherlock Holmes books they’re crazy. I loved reading them as a kid. (still read them at times) I remember reading a series of his “sister”. She was named Elona Holmes. They were pretty nice to read as a kid.

-Katja

@anne_the_noob14 Gotcha, cool! I’ve never seen the movies with Basil Rathbone, but I have heard a lot about them. I really want to see them sometime! 😀

LOL, yeah, I hear you. He actually does such a good job that I don’t think of him as Stark much when I see his Holmes rendition, haha!

@christlover Same here! 😀

@elisha-starquill Oh,…[Read more]