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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey guys!
So far, it looks like the general consensus is for the young girl jumping off the train and being shocked by the world around her. I’m also thinking to get really nice character voice, we should go for first person (present or past) as that is a very deeply biased voice.
@Esjohnson has made a different suggestion on the doc, but I…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh Sounds interesting. One of the main things we need to be keeping in mind though is that we need the character voice to be amazing. Super unique and real. Often it is good to display this through, as @steward-of-the-pen suggested, something we’re all familiar with. Then again, we don’t all want to do the exact same thing.
I think…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
PARIMIS AT ATTENTION!
War has been declared.
And we have responded with the affirmative.
ARE WE READY TO WIN?
The topic is: “Write a scene from the POV of a five year old who has an engaging character voice.”
The word limit is: 2500 words
The deadline is: 23.07.18
The beginning is: NOW!
Some ideas you may want to consider could be…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 6: Writing Emotion for Suspense in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
As you have seen in our last lesson, emotions have a HUGE impact of suspense.
And now you get to write about it.
Just cos you guys are awesome and I believe in your writing skills, I’m entrusting another snippet day to you! See if you can keep using past lessons to build suspense, as well as following a few of my own tips for this lesson, and…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
*sends out a messenger steampunk dragon with letters for you all*
We have two more guildlings, and I trust you’ll all welcome them!
@wishingwell13 @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapud…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 5: Emotions in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
Welcome to our lovely frosty (or maybe sweltering, depending on where you are) first lesson of July! We’re going to be focusing on emotions in storytelling today. What do emotions have to do with pacing and suspense? Glad you asked.
It’s all very well to write a scene that has an insane amount of tension in the action. After all, he only just…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Hmmm, indeeeeeeeed. The main thing is that I don’t know anyone, and I don’t think I can invite anyone into a cabin now… too late in the session.
If we can get 5 people interested, I’ll make a cabin. (If possible.) I will be in two cabins, but hey! That’s fiiiiine.
@wishingwell13 @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @julia @ev…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 4 : The Object in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
WOOT! You made it alllll the way to our 4th lesson! *hands out lembas* Good job. Now we’ll be looking at our beautiful little vectors. Those points that your readers have their attention drawn to. That thing that keeps being mentioned. It doesn’t have to be huge, but the mystery around it does. You need to keep feeling yourself get drawn into it.…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay all ye Parimis, it’s about time we found out why you signed up for a guild.
Here is where we can discuss our WIPs (Works in Progress) and get help and ideas from one another. So essentially, a thread full of flailing brainstorming! *cheers* I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone’s working on!!!
I’ll start us off with a quick…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello Parimis!
I don’t know how many of you are participating in Camp NaNo this year, but I’m making this thread so that if you want extra motivation or need quick help with something it’s just here.
Camp NaNo, for anyone who doesn’t know, is a virtual online writing camp that happens in April and July internationally. You can set yourself a…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion @wishingwell @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @cassie-hartfinh
Okay guys, the results for our first guild war are back! *cheers* We didn’t win, but I loved your…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Okay guys, I’ve handed our submission in. *nodnod* So, now we just have to wait. Good job everyone, and if you didn’t get a chance to participate, don’t worry! Just…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Okay guys! At some point over the next few days, we will be welcoming FIVE NEW PARIMIS! *cheers* Just wanted to let you know so that you could keep your eyes peeled…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 3 : Dialogue in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Here’s the next update on using information to create effective pacing and suspense. If you missed last lesson, it doesn’t matter too much but you can look at it here. Most times, you will write a scene and there will be dialogue. The temptation with have an antagonist vs protagonist scene is to have them both scream at each other their plans. The…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 3 : Dialogue in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Here’s the next update on using information to create effective pacing and suspense. If you missed last lesson, it doesn’t matter too much but you can look at it here. Most times, you will write a scene and there will be dialogue. The temptation with have an antagonist vs protagonist scene is to have them both scream at each other their plans. The…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampioin
Okay all, this is your last chance to add to the doc/edit it. By Sunday in Australia, (a bit over a day away) I’ll be finalising things and trying to work out how on…[Read more]
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Silverclaw replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@joseph-kolapudi My story is coming along well! How is your short story going?
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Evelyn replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@joseph-kolapudi No problem at all!
I like reading all kinds of books actually: classics, adventure, si-fi, fantasy, dystopian, etc. Right now though I’m reading Call of the Wild for school and enjoying more than I was expecting. Have you ever read it?
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Aimie replied to the topic Introductions… in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years, 10 months ago
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapudi @metasua @adag @wysteriacampion
Indeed! There is a first draft, and now it must be added to, changed, and edited! I’ll go through and leave some suggestions so that you all get the idea, then go…[Read more]
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