Jose Cuellar Ramirez

Ereki,

Because I want to get this up before tooooooo late this evening, I will skimp on my initial comment and just introduce the topic, which is the belief system which your character operates on/approaches life with.

A characters moral beliefs will inform their voice (which we looked at earlier), is usually developed early in life (which…[Read more]

Ereki,

It is the beginning of a new week, and we are once again given the gift and blessing of seven days not yet lived, which we can fill with usefulness and diligence! Let’s do so!

As a small way to help with that, post your goals for this week! If you wish, you can update us about last week’s goals, too. 🙂

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My goals this week:

Write 30…[Read more]

Ereki!

*krees loudly*

Come, my faithful warriors! We are once again summoned to battle! But this time, we fight that giant foe, slumber. Yes, that’s right! We have been tasked with writing a dream sequence – which is to say, quite simply, a scene/short story-ish thing where the character is in a dream.

*rubs hands together* Okay. So. This k…[Read more]

Ereki!

The end of the month approaches. The battle has been long and weary, and yet still we fight on. Kree, Kree, Ereki!

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When you turn in the number of your slain enemies at the end of the month, please do it here!

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@sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @emgc @catwing @kelly…[Read more]

Hey Ereki!

So, last week, we focused on how the backstories for our characters should tie into and effect our character voices. And I think it was a very beneficial discussion, all things considered. We had a lot more involvement than in some of the past weeks, so that made me really excited. I love to see everyone’s thoughts, and if possible,…[Read more]

Hello Ereki!

I am, once again, famously belated.

*drapes coat over chair back and sits down quickly*

So. A little backstory about why I’m so late tonight…

*coughs*

First, I was at a surprise birthday party for a friend last night after the evening church service, and that’s normally when I prepare my posts for the beginning of the…[Read more]

So, I missed the October critique, but I’m back with my November piece now. This is actually the first chapter of a novella that I’m writing that I posted here before for a few Alpha readers to look over. It’s only written up to chapter 4 so far, but now that my school has leveled out a little and midterms are over, I’m expecting to be able to…[Read more]

Hi everyone, if you have the time, would you perhaps like to look at my November piece?

Content Warning: There will be blood.

This is actually one of the only pieces of writing that I’ve written that I actually like. I would like feedback on:

-Style. How’s my style?

-Characters. Are the characters developed?

-Setting. Can you see where it…[Read more]

Introduce your Erekdale character, and start socializing with the other random Ereki who show up!

For more information about what we are trying to do in this thread,  please follow this link  and read the first post!

To start off with, we are meeting in the central world-pod. Let’s see where this goes!

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Rules:

1. Do not break role-play. E…[Read more]

Ereki.

It is time to begin anew.

The borders of our fair valley lay yet unmapped, our personal holdings are vague and undefined, and we – the people of Erekdale, are rather unknown, even to ourselves. So we must tread the farthest corners, build up home and hearth, and take a good look in the mirror.

What is Erekdale? And who are it’s…[Read more]

Dearest Ereki,

In order that the peace and tranquility which reigned nearly undisturbed under the leadership of Morrea Firebird may continue without change under my Guildmastering, our guild discussion of character development will continue in the same direction as we were traveling before.

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And so, this week, we come to a lovely little…[Read more]

Ereki!

If it please your honors, announce your weekly writing/life/school goals herein! We’ll collectively give each other a little kick in the pants to keep ourselves going, eh? Anyone is free to check in on anyone and ask how their goals are coming along at any point (but please, no biting!). This is, after all, group accountability; you’re not…[Read more]