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Hi everyone, if you have the time, would you perhaps like to look at my November piece?

Content Warning: There will be blood.

This is actually one of the only pieces of writing that I’ve written that I actually like. I would like feedback on:

-Style. How’s my style?

-Characters. Are the characters developed?

-Setting. Can you see where it takes place?

-Plot. How was the plot?

And any other general comments. I would also like to warn you that the main character is NOT the good guy. Though you’ll probably find that out soon enough.

If you have the time to look at this, I’d really appreciate it!

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