Jordyn Emma West

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Thank you so much!!! 😀 I’m so glad you liked it ^_^ Were there any parts in particular that moved you? (Or would have changed about the story?)

@vivian-grant

Ikr? It’s so beautiful!! Your story sounds interesting as well.

Are you new in Story Embers?

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Which story are you talking about?

@esther-sears

That was so powerful! All most brought me to tears(and I never cry over book)!! So sad and so meaningful! I love it!

@katthewriter Thanks! It’s a complicated mess to write for a lot of reasons, but hopefully maybe by draft 25 it’ll make sense. 😛

@katthewriter

Hi Kat!

It’s been awhile. I been kinda busy. 🙂

How have you been?

This collage is really really neat btw 🙂 🙂 🙂

@pensword

That sounds like a great book.  I would read it.

Sorry for late replying. Friend issues.

@vivian-grant It already sounds super cool!! 😀 I’m excited to read it!

@esther-sears

Thank you! It’s a fantasy about a young prison guard and a magic user commissioned to guard a witch.

Here is the link to the page:

And so it begins!

@vivian-grant Those are sooooo helpful, I appreciate it so much!!

I’d love to read your story! What’s it about?

@esther-sears

I was wondering something. I recently posted the first half of a short story of mine, and though someone read it I was wondering if you would also like to read it before I post the second half?

@esther-sears

You’re welcome! This was a neat brain challenge, and fun besides.

1. There’s the sentence near the beginning ‘As Bjorn and I walked up, I could see that the house was two stories, one of the only ones in the village.’ It’s a little choppy, and it interrupted the flow of the narration. Possible change: ‘As Bjorn and I walked up, I…[Read more]

@vivian-grant Thank you sooo much!! It means so much to hear you say that ^_^ I’m glad to hear you didn’t know what was going to happen right away 🙂

Yes, you are pronouncing Bjorn correctly 😉

That’s a very good point about the ships! Thanks 🙂

Would you mind commenting on the grammer mistakes in the document? I definitely want to get those…[Read more]

@esther-sears

I just finished it. I am rather blown away. The ending was immensely powerful, and well-delivered. Sylas’s descent into maddening jealousy was satisfying, and didn’t feel contrived. I don’t see any blaringly obvious problem with Moira. Early on, it was a 50-50 percent chance that she would go either way, but as Sylas became…[Read more]