JennytheFaun

Leana slowly slipped away from her father, nodding her chin toward the little boy in the corner at Nithel’s worried look. Well, her sort of father.

Nithel looked toward Nathair, recognition dawning. He didn’t want to let her go near him, but… Nathair looked like a lost boy, now. The Star Breather loves him. Perhaps… you were placed here to…[Read more]

Also I meant the 1st book for the 1st time. Sorry if it’s confusing. It’s easier to ask this here instead of KP ’cause most of you are more advanced and older.

<p style=”text-align: left;”>What should I do? What do y’all think?</p>

The room was large and ornate. Not as big as the grand hall but clearly very substantial, the kind you’d expect nobility to possess.

Alessio was looking for a window, and yes! there was one, curtained thickly rushing noises muffled outside. He swung it open with his full force as if to make up for being small and boney. ‘I’ll have that ready…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien, @ragnarok, @kimlikesart

SCENE SETTING – [You arrive in Consul Oscar Woodwall’s living room.]

The room is richly furnished and professionally designed. It’s quite large – could comfortably hold a little over twenty people. The walls are emerald green and the pillars are stark white.

A fountain babbles in the cente…[Read more]

@hannahrenner Cool!

With Alessio through, Nithel jumped in, dragging Leana with him, the boy under his arm still screaming and kicking.

Things swirled before he thudded on the ground. The boy scrambled free. Nithel groaned, lightly, before lifting his head. Kids were sprawled in a cluster around him, with any number of strange emotions crossing their faces. His gaze…[Read more]

“Let’s move!”

Alessio jumped, his first instinct to get everyone down first clashing with dash headlong after Nithel and assume he had a plan. Cursing outloud, he ran after him but he hesitated at the pool until he was sure everyone had made it.

Well. That was his plan.

In actuality, the ground lurched sending him toppling down the pool. It sh…[Read more]

Good discussion and question!

I just had to add in my personal pet peeve. Most of the time in a story, I want a resolution where good wins. And I think a strength of fantasy is that it tends to make good and evil clearer than most genres. When it’s clear in the story, then later the story’s principles and themes get applied in my life in more…[Read more]

Scrolling through Pinterest and found the perfect quote to describe Burn. (And what if feels like writing him. LOL – not once have I actually known what he was about to do when I was writing him. It just happened)

(Also important for you to know that he is posing like Oscar and doing a horrible impersonation of him.)

Hey, so Burn actually likes kids and would be a mother hen – but he has absolutely NO idea what is proper for children or not. He treats them like little adults with less life experience which is great! Until you factor in the shenanigans that he assumes are life experience! (Plus a few other issues like food and outfits and you honestly can…[Read more]

Your quote is just the best! 🤣

So apparently after at least two years of absence, I’m still getting emails from this thread.

Lol that sounds great!!

(Now we will have a responsible adult yay our babies will liveee!!!)

Ideally, I’d say as long as they’re in Burn’s world. Kid-Alessio isn’t as scared of enclosed or underground spaces as adult-Alessio (“adult” 😌)

😁

@hannahrenner @ragnarok @kimlikesart

Cathy & Ragnarok- Nithel could remain the adult. 😄

Nithel also was never a child in human-form. (Though he was a baby/child, as a star.) The youngest he’s been as a human, in looks, is around 18.

I could make him go back to that point, and he could be the ‘adult’… around 7,000 years old. 😄

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Cathy, Ragnarok. & Hannah- (How long do we want…[Read more]