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@fitz

Yess! 🙂 Yours are popping up too in here and my email inbox (I have notifications switched on).

@rose-colored-fancy

I can’t see it either! I saw it upload onto the chat room and then I came back later and it was gone! And a few of my recent posts  have vanished too! Whats going on?

@fitz

Jeepers this is so annoying, I hope you get your critiques back 🙂 Don’t worry, I actually have your corrections saved to a word document so I’m good…[Read more]

@lonathecat

Haha, yep. I got a major idea for one of my plots when I was just walking along a highway one afternoon. (It had nothing to do with highways, but ya know, inspiration is weird sometimes

Wow walks can be so beneficial sometimes! I’ve found that it helps to clear my head sometimes and helps me to figure out stories too 🙂 Dreams too are…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

I see, that sounds quite difficult. You know, if anything, it makes your gift for writing even more amazing, because you are able to overcome your obstacles and create stories! That’s something to be proud of 😉

Oh jeepers my guesses were so close, not so bad at all for my first try lol. She does look a lot like a teacher actually,…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

I’ll do yours now 🙂

Name: Tanya Baker

Age: 18-21 I’d say?

Career, role in story: Best friend or the smart college roommate of the MC

Personality: Warm friendly and loyal. Quite sensitive and quiet, she is always found in the library with her nose in a book. She wouldn’t be very talkative around guys either. But once you get to…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Thank you so much, that means a lot! 🙂 Have you had sight difficulties for your whole life? I know one girl who only got glasses later on in her life because she decided to stare at the sun for a while…

@sparrowhawke

Yeah it’s funny isn’t it haha, I wasn’t expecting anyone to be that accurate XD. Thanks, I’m glad you think so! I wanted my character to have some kind of a disability because I feel like that’s underrepresented in fiction. She was originally partially deaf but I changed it something that I could relate to more. I came across…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Wow your guesses were almost spot on! Impressive 🙂

Name: Emily? Maylie? Mandie? Idk, something feminine, but a bit modern-sounding, if that makes sense

Hehe you were very close! It’s Mayra, which I actually think is also pretty feminine and modern lol

Teen, 14-15 (I’m leaning more toward 15)

She was originally 15 in the first d…[Read more]

Hi so here’s a more complete version of my previous excerpt. I would love to hear any feedback whatsoever, particularly for the fight scene. Like I mentioned before, I am awful at fight scenes. So if anyone here is a ‘fight scene’ expert I would love a bit of advice on the fight moves, descriptions, stances etc. But any other feedback would be…[Read more]

Ooh this looks great! Here’s mine, it’s just a headshot really because I’m terrible at drawing bodies. This is also my first ever attempt at a manga character so it’s a bit messy lol

@fitz

Hiya again! Don’t worry you’re fine, we all have hectic weeks at some point, so you don’t need to apologise.

Thank you so much for your feedback, I’m very grateful for it! I’m glad you like it! And no don’t worry you’re not too harsh at all, it’s perfect thanks! You made me realise I probably should have given a bit more context into the…[Read more]

@arindown

Great idea! Yours made me chuckle lol. This looks like it will be a good laugh XD

Evil Fae Queen: “Humans are disgusting little creatures. They must all DIE!”

Faeries: “Hear, hear!”

Dragon: “Roar!”

Rebels: “Help us strange girl. Even though you are a terrible person, you are our only hope.”

Mayra: “This ain’t my problem. I don’t…[Read more]

This looks like good fun lol XD!

A juvenile delinquent throws a tantrum when she’s given a great power.