Germaine Han

@bama-rose Sorry! Just a little delayed in posting it. Here it is. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7fcU9bi72PoRIK6c3Iv-lpu8Ph1kjFsHJfTv2LLEJs/edit?usp=sharing

@eden-anderson @literatureforthelight @noahlitle @r-m-archer @cassandraia @germaine-han

Hey, guys. Sorry I’m so late. I made a few suggestions. I hope I’m not too late.

Looks good, @literatureforthelight. I couldn’t have written it better. The only thing I would change is the order, but that’s just my personal interest in non-linear narrative showing through.

I hope we win! (NEW WESSEX…[Read more]

@bama-rose Don’t worry about it. We all learned something new, which is great 😀

@daeus-lamb I’m going to sleep over here, so here is the draft as final as I can get it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12GYU8Kcy0Iv6D6ZFs2E39JjkKOFFFIPC8alipiZfx5s/edit

If anyone sees grammar or wording problems, please just go ahead and edit the document…[Read more]

Hey guys, I’ve just finished going through the draft again. The ending is slightly different, and a bit about the bracelet has been moved to the beginning, so if you want to check it out and see what you think?

@bama-rose @cassandraia @eden-anderson @noahlitle @germaine-han

@bama-rose I think what I’m using are em dashes, and I’m using them…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb @noahlitle @cassandraia @eden-anderson @germaine-han

Does anybody know where to put en dashes, em dashes and hyphens? And does it matter? I’m having trouble understanding it when I research it….

Hey guys, I’m sorry I didn’t get too much done today, but I’m hoping to go over the whole thing a second time and tighten up the wording in the next couple of days. If there’s any place you were confused, you think we could put in more/less information, or anything, please go ahead and comment, and even use the suggesting tool to directly edit the…[Read more]

Sorry for being off for so long. Yesterday, I couldn’t access the forum thread (or any forum thread) but it seems to be back on today. I went ahead and did some prewriting, though.

So what I have right now is a story about a figure skater, who’s story has been about switching coaches and working his way through all the new struggles to finally l…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb @germaine-han @bama-rose @msqueen8 @eden-anderson @corissa @literatureforthelight @r-m-archer

Where is everybody? We need to get going on this.

I would love to write this, but I’m not sure if I’ll have the time. I need to write a blog post, and I need to work on my WIP.

So, what if we take the villain learning to be the hero, and we…[Read more]

@msqueen8 @eden-anderson    Thanks!

@kate    You haven’t seen them!? You have to at least see Sabrina. Inception has a little too much cussing and violence for me to be wholehearted in my recommendation, but Sabrina is good. Seriously, go watch it. XD

@daeus-lamb    Awesome! Thanks. Do you mind me asking which post it was?

What do you guys thi…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb @germaine-han @bama-rose @msqueen8 @eden-anderson @corissa @literatureforthelight @r-m-archer

I had a great idea that was totally not inspired by my latest blog post on backstory. XD

What if we cut back and forth between the past and the present, in a way that emphasizes their similarities, but this time (in the present), the hero is…[Read more]

I think it’s important to remember that there’s a difference between a happy ending and a perfect ending. In my opinion it’s the perfect endings that are cliché, while the happy endings can actually be really satisfying. While a story might end with the characters hurting and darkness and evil still existing, the story can still end happy.

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Whoa, I love this prompt. It could go so many different ways… honestly, the first thing that popped in my head (though I have no idea why) is a story about a little(ish) boy who’s sitting inside a safe room while the world is ending outside but he’s happy because he has an ice cream cone. XD

I agree with @eden-anderson though; I find it a…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb

Aghhh! This sounds SO fun! I love happy endings. This will be great! 😀

I like you ideas @germaine-han! I’m currently working on writing a short story about this young couple who loved playing guitar together but when the wife gets cancer they have to stop. During the fourth year of her cancer battle, the wife asks her husband to play…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb
Pretty much what Germaine was discribeing, the unexpected endings. Pixar has a lot of these, you go into the movie thinking you know how this is going to end yet they manage to turn this on its head while still making it a happy ending. Think of Toy Story 3, none of the toys go with thier beloved Andy to collage, instead they find a…[Read more]

@bama-rose @kate @germaine-han @daeus-lamb @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight

Thanks! What did you guys think of the posts?